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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical

    Hello! This is RennissanceBlade popping over to leave a review. This is actually really good! I think that the only problem is not knowing if there is a sentence structure ...

    Mar 28, 2021

  • Oh my Illuvitar... That made me tear up! Gosh, the wording just hits the heart... I'd say that there is something to change, but there really isn't. You used the ...

    Mar 28, 2021

  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Spiritual
    Re: Stones and Stars

    Daaang! This is a wonderful analogy poem... whether it was meant to be one or not. Your use of scientific wording really gave this some depth and feeling to it. ...

    Mar 28, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Natural Nature

    Haha... I love the ending! The rhythm and pentameter of this piece are on point, making me want to read it more than once. All I would say is add ...

    Mar 28, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other
    Re: In the Morning

    I love the rhythm to this poem. It brings across a beautiful morning that I would love to freeze time to see, and that is the important thing. I feel ...

    Mar 28, 2021

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction
    Re: Martyr

    O.o Wow... I was not expecting that ending! This is a great story that flows really well and there is no confusion. Thank you! I would love to see more ...

    Mar 28, 2021

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: I Believe

    Nice! I love the way you rhymed and brought forth the 'aura' or feel of the subject so easily. The words twist and mold to make a picture and I ...

    Mar 26, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: What others see

    Wow! This is a really good poem that touches deeply on a subject close to me. The only problem there, I think, is your punctuation. There are multiple spots that ...

    Mar 26, 2021

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Science Fiction
    Re: Dread

    Dang! That was crazy. Even though this is super short (as it is a short story), I got the feeling that something bigger was going on in the background. Who ...

    Mar 26, 2021

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