Renard

I have done all the technical stuff, and added some little bits of continuity and description. This will require a bit more editing, but I may just leave it as ...

Thank you for the review :) Ok, so there are some glitches with this work. Continuity errors and some technical stuff. Oops. I will have a go at them if ...

Thanks for defending me Iggy. and @CollinWitte I'm not your buddy.

Good good. Kill the spam. XD

Anytime. Aww thank you. You're nice too. We should talk sometime. And yeah, I related completely to what you wrote. :)

Don't apologise, it's just my opinion, doesn't mean I'm right. You're a good writer.

Ohhh. XD LOL Fair enough.

Anytime

LOL. Ok then. That was it. Other than that... great job. Loving the username and the avatar. Go Perks! Go Potter! XD

They are not mistakes per se, it just annoys my OCD. XD Like here: If I could paint a picture I'ld tell you what it said The only line out ...

Fair enough. To each their own.

Formatting did go funny. It has been doing that a lot lately. The center was just me playing around. I may move it back then. Thanks for the review. :)

S'ok. but yeah, a bit more variety could be cool. :)

That was a beautiful and kind review, thank you. :) -hugs-

Yes, this is exactly an angry mind recipe. XD You have a habit of saying the nicest things to me I've ever heard. Thank you Iggy. :) -big hugs-