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Re: The Border of Light, Three
Hello. This work is quite long. as I was reading through it, there was one particular sentence that stood out for me: If I could only finish this in one ...
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Re: Over Exposure
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL XD I'm sorry. *composes self for review* XD *grunt* *grunt* *grunt* *grunt* What is all this abou
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Planes
The title of this one sounded like a pop song. But I didn't expect you to write a pop song,don't worry. XD Someone's picking me up Picking me up from ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: No More Science
Hmmm. Alright, this work is just a little bit silly. Can't see no more science Can't see no more science Can't see no more science Can't see no more science ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Cross Country
I've been running for 20 miles now I really should take a break I'm feeling drowsy, I'm feeling dizzy I may have a belly ache No more people to come ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Buildings
Oooh. This is some typical stuff of yours. Very gritty and shouty. I see Big Ben- a typical building Just plain and uneventful Apart from the fact it's all shiny ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Religion
Heyo. I went into this feeling skeptical because of the title. Hmmm. You didn't disappoint. Ooh, I must point out, that it's nice to consistently see that you don't use ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Smile
Ooh, you wrote this one with nasty intent XD Ha ha. I like it, very bitter the narration in this and that carries well from the tone you've created. I ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Big Creatures
Hello. XD Compared to some of your later works this could be seen as rather immature, but on the same note, the childlike nature of the song is what I ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: A letter of complaint to the gossipy girls in gym class
LOL. XD First of all. Review. Second of all. This is obviously based on something you've seen/experienced. I am wondering.. XD 'Who wants a man of heroic staunchness when he ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Wheels of Freedom
Hello. I can see why this work is featured because of its theme. "hope" I don't know what made you think to write this? I had made it out. I ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Better Days Ch.2
Hello. I couldn't tell whether this was a short story or an excerpt from a novel? You have an interesting theme: looters and war. It's a very suffocating work, for ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Knight In Shining Armor
Hello. This work is very long, very detailed and also very interesting. I was surprised, from the beginning, I didn't know where it was going. XD I think the work ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Life Without Regrets [Chapter Three]
Hello. This is a very short chapter. However, you're writing a novel? I think in the editing process it will need to be made longer, but for now, it's a ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Writers Block
Hello. XD I am going to give this a proper review, because it's a proper work. It's writing about a struggle, it's about the battle a writer faces against a ...
Jun 30, 2014
