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Renard

You're beauty isn't registering on my scale because I don't have x-ray vision

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Border of Light, Three

    Hello. This work is quite long. as I was reading through it, there was one particular sentence that stood out for me: If I could only finish this in one ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Lyrics » Humor, Lyrical Re: Over Exposure

    LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL XD I'm sorry. *composes self for review* XD *grunt* *grunt* *grunt* *grunt* What is all this abou

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Humor Re: Planes

    The title of this one sounded like a pop song. But I didn't expect you to write a pop song,don't worry. XD Someone's picking me up Picking me up from ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Science Re: No More Science

    Hmmm. Alright, this work is just a little bit silly. Can't see no more science Can't see no more science Can't see no more science Can't see no more science ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Satire Re: Cross Country

    I've been running for 20 miles now I really should take a break I'm feeling drowsy, I'm feeling dizzy I may have a belly ache No more people to come ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Lyrics » Humor, Health Re: Buildings

    Oooh. This is some typical stuff of yours. Very gritty and shouty. I see Big Ben- a typical building Just plain and uneventful Apart from the fact it's all shiny ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Humor Re: Religion

    Heyo. I went into this feeling skeptical because of the title. Hmmm. You didn't disappoint. Ooh, I must point out, that it's nice to consistently see that you don't use ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Smile

    Ooh, you wrote this one with nasty intent XD Ha ha. I like it, very bitter the narration in this and that carries well from the tone you've created. I ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Lyrics » Supernatural, Lyrical Re: Big Creatures

    Hello. XD Compared to some of your later works this could be seen as rather immature, but on the same note, the childlike nature of the song is what I ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A letter of complaint to the gossipy girls in gym class

    LOL. XD First of all. Review. Second of all. This is obviously based on something you've seen/experienced. I am wondering.. XD 'Who wants a man of heroic staunchness when he ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Wheels of Freedom

    Hello. I can see why this work is featured because of its theme. "hope" I don't know what made you think to write this? I had made it out. I ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Better Days Ch.2

    Hello. I couldn't tell whether this was a short story or an excerpt from a novel? You have an interesting theme: looters and war. It's a very suffocating work, for ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Knight In Shining Armor

    Hello. This work is very long, very detailed and also very interesting. I was surprised, from the beginning, I didn't know where it was going. XD I think the work ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Life Without Regrets [Chapter Three]

    Hello. This is a very short chapter. However, you're writing a novel? I think in the editing process it will need to be made longer, but for now, it's a ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Writers Block

    Hello. XD I am going to give this a proper review, because it's a proper work. It's writing about a struggle, it's about the battle a writer faces against a ...

    Jun 30, 2014


I love her dearly, but I can’t live with her for a day without feeling my whole life is wasting away.
— Miss Kenton, The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro