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When I first started reading this I thought it was a non fiction piece. This is so realistic! Mum and Dad were the usual working parents. The casual tone you ...

Ok, so this caught my attention because it has a French title. ♥ Oui, oui, oui. Now: 'Shadows cast down from the streetlamp seemed all too fitting on his face.' ...

This has got to be one of the sweetest things I have ever read. I love the dedication at the beginning. I love the way you've made the entire thing ...

I love the length of this piece. The style in which it is written: 'Though he was doing good and this job paid him well...' So casual, but it works ...

It suddenly occurred to me that I have never read nor reviewed any of your works on here. That just isn't right! So I thought I would do a review ...

Heggo! Ok, so you asked me to review, here we go... Since I know you have referenced heavily from the original sources on this one I approve greatly of the ...

The use of language in this piece is very striking. 'Emails fester, ooze and bleed' = great imagery for the reader. 'Faceless punisher' = something tells me you feel very ...

I like the fact you are trying to adopt an archaic writing style. The use of olden day language really helps make this piece seem authentic. Such as with:'I have ...

As you know, I have been excited to read this piece. And I have not been disappointed. Firstly, I love the name of your protagonist as part of characterisation: 'Aya ...

Yes me again! The one who writes essays. ;) So... you have really shown another dimension of your story in this chapter. Aria’s problems are moving in a new direction ...

Holy bananas! I wasn’t expecting the brutality of that opening line: ‘"Let's see what's inside the mixed race mongrel's bag, shall we?"’ It’s great though: because you really make me ...

Hi!!! First of all, opening line: ‘I broke a promise: a promise to myself that I would stop the cutting.’ Amaze-balls. You delve straight into the action. Good. Your use ...

Heggo! First of all, I love that you have dedicated this work to someone. It makes it much more personal and deep. The length of the work is perfect for ...

Heggo! This is me introducing myself! ;) I love the honesty in your work: 'You feel helpless and vulnerable...' You communicate directly with the reader and they immediately understand what ...

Helloo! Here to review (again) as requested! So... as I have already mentioned: I am in love with this piece, and it is quite honestly one of your best works ...