Renard

For a suicide note, this starts off incredibly formally. I imagine this kind of language is appropriate to your character: 'As the years wore on, my desire for her grew ...

'It's awkward, awkward But at least I can talk to you' Being able to summarise this work in these words makes me happy. I think you'll guess that reading this ...

Hello. :) I am going to dissect this line by line: 'Hi… Reader, I guess!' - How can you not be sure who you're writing to? 'Okay, so my head ...

Right, first thing I notice with this, is that your paragraphs are rather lengthy. Now that's not a problem except for the one that starts: 'I am not an ordinary ...

How to put it? Amaze-balls. You should hunk all of these together to create an awesomesauce series. You could entitle it 'blanks' or 'white' or something. Make a statement about ...

Hell yeah! I am finding it difficult to describe my enthusiasm for these pieces now. They are the fastest things I have ever read. And thoroughly enjoyable I must say ...

Heggo. Good evening. This is not the nine o'clock news. -clears throat- Here we go. :) I am going to address this line by line. 'I want to have sex.' ...

OMG OMG OMG I am so excited to find that this is a series of yours and I am just loving the theme. 'Blankess' is just brilliant! Don't you think? ...

Wow this piece was long. XD And the artwork brilliant. :) I could tell from the first line that you had a very flamboyant, descriptive writing style: 'Azula let out ...

I think the message of this piece is really powerful. Standing up to people is something that a lot of people struggle with and the way you present it here ...

Let's get the nit-pick out of the way: Every 'i' in this piece should be a capital letter when it's on its own. 'and I am not a doctor' for ...

You intercept the longer paragraphs with thoughtful short sentences beautifully in this piece. 'I had monsters inside my head.' 'I was fixed. Cured. Normal.' They summarise the points beautifully. Goo

I have never seen such consistently obstinate characters in my entire life. The pretentious efficiency with which the relationship between Cadogan and Collins evolves is truly amazing. Lines such as: ...

Hey! Trying to review this work in a way that does it justice is difficult. Haiku's are hard enough to pick on anyway, because they are so short. In this ...

'Mockery by the new ages' As with most of your works, there is a serious underlying issue. This line monopolises the view throughout the entire work. :) 'Blood spills so ...