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It seems to be lacking in something. Not sure what, though. It just feels very empty, like there is no point to it. I would definitely expand on it.

Not funny at all. The whole thing seemed rather pointless.

:) Agreed!

Very true. If you take the time to listen, languages such as hers are very beautiful. They lend themselves to poetry and music much more easily than ours.

"You must understand us, but we do not have to understand you. Or even bother to educate ourselves." That is the complete opposite of what I was saying. What I ...

That was probably for the best. Nobody should be in a class where the professor does not at least show some respect for your plight, even if he does not ...

I believe we have the makings of a wonderful satirist.

In that case it was racism, and any opinions he has about your work on this subject matter is probably not worth while unless it's about style or your use ...

I never did win that conest. Oh well. OSAP and help from my mom has proven enough until I get a job for the summer. And my unicorn and I ...

I like it! Rants are fun.

Either way, it's still rude to tell her what she may and may not write just because she is not up to your standards. Regardless of how you say it, ...

Very clever and very cute in the best possible way! I would love to see it incorporated into a novel. You've got very well defined characters and lots of material ...

Repetition isn't always a bad thing. Heck, so much of traditional story-telling is full of repetition. They also appear to lack depth unless you know to look for it. Metephorically ...

Yeah, it's really funny how much disguised swearing there is in his plays.

Generally I would agree that changing the word is necessary, but in this case it fits. The word you chose fits the language of the culture and using a different ...