-
Re: The Mermaid and her Shark (part one)
Really good review. How did you do the different colors?
Jun 15, 2017 -
Re: Johnny!!!
If you found "a lot' then, I would appreciate it if you called them all out.
Jun 11, 2017 -
Re: Everyone Act Natural!
Hmm, yeah, I get what you mean. The setup and pay off I don't think really connect. I'll think about it.
Jun 11, 2017 -
Re: Teen Spirit
Sorry this is very late. My thought process with the knife thing was that Sophie and Jackie were at each other's homes so they would have used their cups, spoons, ...
Jun 1, 2017 -
Re: Love, Psych Class, and Other Weirdness.
You're writing is beautiful!
May 31, 2017 -
Re: Disgrace
Thank you for he feedback, but this is a spec script so there suppose to be no camera angles and cuts. Also The formatting got all messed up when I ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Disgrace
It helped a lot. Thank you. Also I tend to have trouble with little mistakes and flow. It's annoying. I try to talk out loud and proof read it and ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: My Perfect Match
I am so sorry. I didn't pay attention to the name. Dom is a good name. I just forgot about it and assumed they were in a heterosexual relationship. Yes, ...
May 27, 2017 -
Re: Disgrace
You're right. Thank you I will work on that.
May 27, 2017 -
Re: Saving Coralie- Chapter 1.
Just to let you know,I will be review this, but later.
Jan 3, 2017 -
Re: Stuck on Osetsa
Thank you for the review I should have been more clear that he uses the police drones as practice to fight the drones in the research facility.
Jan 2, 2017 -
Re: Character Names List
This is really cool and all, but this should be in a forum.
Jul 18, 2016 -
Re: To write or not to write
Oh my god! I love it! I totally relate!
Jun 11, 2016 -
Re: A Dungeon Boss's Journal Chapter 1
Liked your story. Sorry can't review. It was well written!
May 18, 2016 -
Re: Like an Object
Thanks you for your review and I did mean that I found a story online and based it off that. I didn't copy and paste.
May 5, 2016