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Hi, It's Red, and I saw your chapter 5 and decided to start from the beginning. So far, the story is good. The mother/daughter relationship and dialogue feels realistic, and ...

Hello it's Red, I always like a story about good ol' religion and how it sometimes can be someone's downfall. What I appreciated the most was the structure of the ...

Hi, I would like to say that I am really enjoying your story so far, and I'm curious to know where the story is going so far. I really like ...

This is a very sweat story! You created a very nice atmosphere with your descriptive writing. I received a strong and pleasant tone from the story. For example this line ...

Wow, I really liked this story. I'm getting some lesbian vibes from Junipor which I am happy about because I don't see a lot of LGBT stuff on here, so ...

Hello Thestraycat, I would like to say that I do know where you're coming from and I see your point from the essay is that society wrongly depicts being in ...

Hi there, I really like your story so far. It's well written, and I already got a feeling who this Mathvey is. I'm unsure who the lady is though. The ...

Hello, here to review. I always like a good crime mystery! I have not read the other two chapter, so I am just going off what I read from the ...

Good story, good story. It kept my interest. I like the idea of the main character getting kicked out of her house as a conflict. It's interesting to me the ...

Hi there, Red here for a review. I'm not sure really where to start. Based on your description, I got something different than I thought. I thought it would be ...

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Hey it's Red here with a review like i promised. Much improvement. I feel like you took some advice and I glad to see there is no over description anywhere. ...

Hey it's Red, Description is an essential part of writing and to be honest yours was good... It was certainly there and did a job of showing and not telling. ...

Hey there again! I am happy to see that your writing has improved. I feel there is more description and it's better than previous chapters. Great to see you added ...

Yay another good installment. I enjoyed the continuation for this story. Good see those characters again. To be honest not too much to say. I did notice two things in ...