RedVines

Hey, great work, I love how you write, it flows really well. A few things that didn't flow as well: "as squirrels chirrup and chatter to one another as they ...

Hi! Instead of Shes needy about a third of they way down it's she's needy. Capitalize your I's in some places Instead of Whose needy, jealous, nothing, write Who's needy ...

Hi! Love the poem. Very minimal, but expressive. It was really bleak and kind of sad but I think you wrote it really well. When you write "Dead." in the ...

Hi! I really liked your diction but unfortunately I think I missed something. I had a little trouble understanding this poem. When you said "unzip it like the stations do" ...

Hey, great job! I can really feel your emotion in your artwork. The rough brushstrokes and blood colored words show your pain well, good artistic choices. Your poem captures melancholy ...

Magnificent! This was very well written! I especially liked the lines "She, a caterpillar. .. " and "hiding the remorse. . ." Also, the connection from the last tine to ...

Well Katie's lucky to have such a nice friend who will write her poetry! Good job! I just have a few suggestions. When you say "or maybe he just forgot ...

Hello, RedVines here, Kudos for trying something new! Just so you know in my reviews I write them while reading so you can see what a reader is thinking as ...

Wow, it's very visual! There is negativity in the first stanza when you write "Like the fangs of an invisible rattlesnake" and "If the sky could cry blood." Are you ...