RedBird

Shall I hazard a guess and say that this will be Faerie oriented? That's MY impression anyway, and I'll let you know that it was my first impression, and that ...

Well, this definitely and interesting starter...a good draw-in, anyway. You might want to tweak the format for both of the little "bios" of the character, so that it doesn't look ...

Hey there! Reddy here for a review! This is a great poem, I must say. It seems quite well thought out, and the subject matter is very interesting. Your rhythm ...

Hi there! Reddy here for a review. Okay...I have to say, I enjoyed this. It seems well thought out, and is all together quite interesting. However, there are just a ...

Okay, I like your ideas, but this still needs a bunch of work. Firstly, the rhythm is out of whack. The words don't flow the way they should. Every poem ...

I think the imagery you've come up with here is brilliant. That said, there are some things that do need to be worked on. On an unrelated note, poetry doesn't ...

Hiya! I like you ideas in this poem, I really do. However, there's are some things you can do to make it even better. Your rhythm is pretty good, but ...

Hi! This poem has the potential to be absolutely amazing. You just need to work on it some more. First, your rhythm is off. Try reading this aloud, and you'll ...

Heya! Ok, I have to admit, I loved this. The fact that you like to push boundaries is amazing, and is something that many people lack. This poem is indeed, ...

Hmmmm, this has the potential to be pretty good if you do some serious editing. First and foremost, although your rhythm is fairly okay, it could do with shaping up. ...

Hey there! Reddy here for a review! First things first...This was put together fairly well. I think that the different colors went well with this poem, and made it stand ...

Ah, some political satire...If that's what you intended. That's just how I took it. But, anyhoo... I liked it. The wording was quite nice, except for a few wee spots, ...

Hey! Reddy here for a review... Okay, let's cut straight to the chase. All in all, this was a nice piece. The rhythm was very nice, and I liked the ...

At first, when I stared reading this, I felt the rhythm was off, but as I got further in to it, I realized, that it wasn't. It was just different. ...

Okay, I, like empressoftheuniverse, am confused. Was this a fan poem about Owl City? Just wondering. Other than that, your main problems were typos. There were quite a few of ...