RebellionLies

I'm going to have to pick this up sometime, I've read Ender's Game by Card and absolutely loved it (though the sequels were very disappointing in my opinion). I must ...

I would venture to guess that this is a very good piece of writing. That would be an accurate guess. I did enjoy it very much, and couldn't find anything ...

It is an enjoyable poem, but the hard shifts were distracting, such as But it comes back Back again to bloom I am happy I know Perhaps you can divide ...

First off, are you a Modest Mouse fan? Anyways, I really enjoyed the story. The only thing I caught was... I didn't know. I was interested in the material, that ...

Your poem is nice, we've all been there and asked the same questions. I hope you handle it better than I do. But for a bit of critique, as springrain2693 ...

Overall, I enjoyed the piece. It has good potential and could use some work. The only thing I've caught that no one else has yet mentioned is for you to ...

That was pretty amazing, Edgar Allan Poe would destroy you for this. I could never write a poem so entertaining. You've injected happiness straight into my veins, I'm going off ...

I enjoyed it, it's just my cup of tea, but... Just one thing that I could not stand was the "And yes," continuation. This may have been an alliteration, but ...