RavenNaal

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! The theme of suicide is very deep, and you managed to convey its meaning in a well written and respectful manner. The stanza breaks of ...

The personification of Winter was very well handled in this poem! It was a very enjoyable read and really kept interest. Starting off with the thought of luring in and ...

This poem was very thoughtfully put together. It was very fun to read! I enjoyed the topic of the perpetualness of time and how the world will not stop even ...

This poem was a great read! The theme of life being nothing more than a story that we have not read yet is great. Your repetition of lines really forces ...

This story was very interesting! The theme of someone I presume to be young having voices that taunt them is fun, same with the happy juice and wall of masks. ...

This short story was great! A very fun concept of a detective protecting a young vampire. You made the relationships of the different characters very interesting to read, the most ...

A great second part to your last piece! This one felt like it had much more of a lighthearted feel compared to the dark theme last time. It was a ...

This was a really good and interesting short story! The characters and theme are really well thought and fun to read. Its execution is near flawless! It was very creative ...

This is a really good start to a story! The introduction of the first two characters is well handled and both have interesting personalities and situations. The concept for the ...

I loved this! I don't totally understand what's with this website and chickens since im new, but if its births great poems like this then I love it! From what ...

Great poem, loved the theme and its done very well in this writing! You really managed to put the battle of democracy into your poem in a logical and run ...

This story seems to be very promising. The premise of dragon infused people as well as dragon rider academy will make for an interesting read. The back story of Nereid ...

This story was quite lighthearted and fun to read! It was enjoyable to read the small banter of two clowns over honking each other's noses. The concept is quite humorous ...

This poem is amazing! I love how you put all the thoughts of the character into words and how the flow of the words fit all together. Super well done! ...

Very nice poem, I love the theme of imagination from a child's perspective! What I interpreted the theme of this poem to be is the imagination of children and how ...