RavenLords

Hello RavenLords here, well usually I would say a lot about a poem but this one is a bit short, not that that's bad. Anyways its short and sweet and ...

Hello Maximilia, RavenLords here to review you wonderful poem on this cold, winter day. First off, nice poem. It is smooth, and stays on one subject the whole time.But there ...

Hello Joslyn, RavenLords here for a review on this fine day. Wow, last day of tenth grade all ready ? Why is there a space there?!?! Take it out. Why ...

Hello GreenTulip, RavenLords here for another amazing review on your wonderful story! First of all I must say that I loved the first chapter, but sadly I didn't get time ...

Hello amandajodowning, I'm RavenLords here for a review on this fine day. About in the middle of the first paragraph, you say: He was an author and a cartoonist. Personally ...

Hello nanya, I'm RavenLords to give you a stupendous review on your poem. The word choices in this poem are fantastic. You use so many cool words that you don't ...

Hello TKLKOMOMID, RavenLords here for a review Stupendous review! A few things I think could be improved: I thought that the lyrics were very smooth, clean. Throughout most the song ...

Hello EmilieHaugaard, I'm RavenLords with a review for the Epic Ice Cream Warriors of Pluto. First of all I must say I loved the flow and the Style. The music ...

Hello there, It's RavenLords for a Epic Ice Cream Warriors of Pluto review. First of all I thought it was a very nice song over all. It does describe a ...

Hello RachelLescano, As anyone could tell this is a very short but descriptive poem. I believe this is a Cinquain, but I'm not sure. The words you use are descriptive ...