RavenBlack

Thank you so much for the review! That's weird that it didn't show up until review day. Could have been something wrong with the site or something xD With regards ...

I guess you'll have to wait and see ;)

Thanks again for the review! This was one of my favourite chapters to write! Arthur is such an interesting character to develop! To answer your question about his assumption about ...

Thanks again for the review, they really help put the story in perspective! I agree with a lot of what you said, especially the first dialogue you pointed out. Everytime ...

Hi jster02, it's nice to hear from you after so long :D Thanks for the review again, I'm glad you enjoyed it and found it interesting. I've been picking up ...

It may be obvious for you as the writer because since you wrote it, you already know what it looks like. But for example you said Parthenon indicated that it's ...

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked the changes I made to the classic story of Excalibur, it was really fun to write!

Thank you! Glad you still like it :D

Thank you so much for the review! Comments like this motivate me to continue this script, so thank you so much. I'm glad you like it!

Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm glad you could infer the tension between the two characters despite only reading this chapter! Shows I'm doing something right xD I need ...

I agree, making the reader relate to your work is the greatest experience and compliment to have. It's a difficult thing to do in my opinion and you did it ...

Thanks for the feedback! The thing with the corpses being in front of the gate was because even though the tales are told about lost souls of the dead residing ...

Thank you!

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad that Lady Luck's manipulation was plausible, I was worried that it wouldn't be. And I totally agree with all the points you've made, I'll ...

Thanks again for the review, I'm really happy that you made it this far! Just to clear up a question you had. The soldiers laugh because they call her "m'lady" ...