RavenBlack

Hey Raven Black here! I'm going to review this as I go along :-D -'Shevia floated in darkness for she spotted a boy sitting under a light' The way this ...

Hey Raven here! I'm going to review this as I go along. :-) - I think you should separate the first dialogue and put it in onto a new line. ...

Hey Raven Black here! :-) I LOVE MIA! SHE'S SO SASSY! Let's start with the positives! :-D -Dialogue was very funny and engaging, the conversation between Finnley and Mia was ...

Hey Raven Black here! Let's start with the positives! :-D - I love the description you've used in this piece, especially the transformation! It really illustrates the horror of it ...

Hey Raven Black here! Let's start with the positives :-) -Intriguing characters - Finnley is so relatable, I need a job but I don't want to go through the hassle ...

Hey Raven Black here! Omg I loved this, you made me laugh and smile throughout! Let's start with the positives! :-) - Has I said, great read really enjoyed reading ...

Hey Raven Black here! First off, interesting read. I can tell there's an necessity for them to get wherever it is they have to go through your writing, which is ...

Hey Raven Black here! Why did you have to make me feel so bad for killing insects T_T But maybe that's a good thing because apparently we need them as ...

Hey Raven Black here! First off great read, I rarely like witch stories but this one intrigued me especially the last bit! Lets start with the positives shall we! - ...

Guess who's back, back again? RavenBlack's back, tell a friend. (I'll stop now :-D) Great piece again, was really interesting to see interactions between the visitors and yourself and other ...

Hey Raven Black here! This was an interesting read, never read this style of a short story before, which was refreshing. Positives: - Great choice of style - I think ...

Hey RavenBlack here! I love this! The feeling of obsession is pretty strong in this piece, quite overwhelming actually but it intrigues me even more. Positives: -Interesting start - given ...

*claps wildly* THIS IS AMAZING AND SO RELATABLE! I've been writing for three years now (i think) and I've thrown away so many pieces of failed work that sometimes I ...

Hey Raven Black here! First of this is really interesting! I really want to know what Riku said that caused the two characters to get put into prison and tortured ...

Hey RavenBlack here! This was very interesting and unique read, I don't think I've read a split POV story before which was refreshing. Let's start with the positives :-D : ...