Rascalover

I am writing this for an English class. You have to use vignettes to describe social issues that have helped shape who you are.

Thank you much!

Hi!!! I just have to say this is absolutely beautiful, and I'm in love with this love story. Literally, the only thing I saw wrong was this line: you would ...

Thanks! i am glad you enjoyed it!

It is more like a short story about a woman falling in love with the color of someones eyes. Thanks for your review :)

Wow, this is so old, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Feel free to read all the other poems in my portfolio.

Thank you! It was a lot of fun to write!

Awesome! You did a fantastic job!

thank you so much! :)

Hi! I enjoyed reading this poem, but I am a little confused as to why you used a paragraph at the end instead of continuing to write in verse. I ...

This seems like a great idea, but towards the end it gets a little confusing. Has the man died yet? Is he stuck in the inbetween? Is he talking to ...

I love expanding thought to inanimate objects! thanks for the review :)

Thanks for such a sweet review :)

I really enjoyed reading that sentence with a but instead of an and; thank you for such a great review!

It'd be fun to do more :)