Rascalover

Hey! It's my turn to review your magnificent piece of work, since you reviewed the first five chapters of my new novel! I'll show some small editing things and then ...

Hi! This is magnificent! Truly, I could feel this poem with my soul. I don't really have any critiques, but this stanza: "All would be made well. Nothing would be ...

Hi! You have a unique perspective on an accident scene here. I think if there more descriptive writing and action, it would run smoother. I read this thinking she or ...

Hi, This piece of writing is magnificent! I absolutely am drawn to it. I think it's a message in which most of us can relate to. We are our worst ...

Hi!! I really enjoy this because when I turned 18 becoming an adult was the last thing on my mind. I haven't changed even at 23 and I don't know ...

Hi! This is a great piece of work, with tons of potential! there are just a few things I do want to point out: 1) The very first sentence is ...

Hi! This was amazingly creepy! I was so caught up in the story that I didn't really notice any grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. mistakes. Towards the end I did catch ...

Accidentally sent the review twice :) Sorry!

Hi! I really enjoyed this poem. I love the rhyme you have going on and the repetition of I believe is just enough to keep the poem moving. What's a ...

Hi! I'm in love with Jack. I think you wrote this story extremely well. I love how you spread around just the right amount of memories at the right time ...

Hi!! I'm not really here for a review because I didn't see much wrong with this piece. This was eloquently written and the descriptions were plentiful. I enjoyed the characters ...

Hi!!! No judging, I promise! I really enjoyed this piece because the thought of becoming paranoid become you have just become a mother is extremely intriguing. You see the world ...

Hi!! This is thrilling, brilliant, poi gent, hopeful, then crushing, and that's why I like it. Am I twisted enough to be happy for Addi when she jumped? You made ...

Hi!!! This is incredible! The last line is forever lingering in my head. Brilliant writing. I really didn't see any corrections that were made. I was a tad confused when ...

Hi!! This is a really interesting poem idea, and I love how the stanzas are separated. I just can't wrap my mind around what this poem is about. Clearly it ...