Rascalover

I hold out my hand, grasping, reaching, Needing someone to hold it, grasp it. A warm hand encloses it, squeezes it, Let's me know they'll be there, always. The reppition ...

Blood runs down my cheek. You are good with description, and I see that later on in the story, but I need more description here. This is the first sentence ...

Well' I have. Im sure it's just a typo but there's an apostroph after well and there shouldn't be one. :) But never could I have imagined that I would ...

Wow, just breath taking. I love this chapter because it gives much suspense before the actually event. But you also do alot of telling. Instead of saying she felt at ...

Hello Misschoo, I am so happy to be the one to welcome you to young writers society! Let me inform you of our rules though because it seems you haven't ...

I want you to know i have not fortgotten about you. I am working on your review right now. I had it all done but then my computewr deleted it ...

I have never read a Midnight Summers Dream. So I will not know who Puck is. maybe you should describe him a little more, and give more detail, maybe some ...

Sadness. The burning sensation that scorched my insides with a wildfire The icy cold clarity of what my heart unfolded to my mind. My thoughts, as dark and menacing as ...

... This pulls the reader in, I liked it very much! It makes me interested in the rest of the poem. i'm usually not a big fan of poems but ...

But what happens then? When your shell has fallen? You are left with nothing but your pain. I just wanted to stay that was my favorite stanze by all means. ...

There are few to no errors. This absolutely blew me away. Sarah is amazingly human, and a bit crazy. the style in which you wrote this was fantastic! And.... (drum ...

You made a few silly mistakes thta you could of fixed with easy proffreading, but over all I loved it! The blood splattered against the cement floor like a paintbrush ...

Trees of Promise Im not really feeling the title, but maybe at the end of my review Ill have thought of some thing else The trees were always there, A ...

I do to stop it? This doesnt fit here it interupts the flow of the poem. I thought it to be well written but you try to hard to make ...

Wow I really like this one. Nice rythming technic and good topic! its very relatable. So harsh you seem, So cold you appear, But it's all an act, a cover, ...