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Re: Don't Give Up, It's Not Worth It
Hey! I'm not quite sure if you really need or want a review for this. I appreciate you pouring your soul into art to share with us though! Sometimes life ...
Dec 12, 2018 -
Re: Do You Know What It's Like?!
Hey! I am so sorry if this coming from a personal place, and you feel this consistently. I, too, have had past traumas and have felt this way on many ...
Dec 12, 2018 -
Re: White
Hey! This is magnificent. I love the story in this poem. The only thing I can see to critic is that theres a change in the poems flow after the ...
Dec 11, 2018 -
Re: My Song
Hey! You are a very talented, and this was definitely something right up my alley, going through a break up right now. I think everything after the first six lines ...
Dec 11, 2018 -
Re: Alvarado Pt.2
Hey! I have finally gotten to the second chapter of your work, sorry it took so long, but I usually do these things while I'm at work on third shift. ...
Dec 11, 2018 -
Re: Alvarado
Hey: So, I know you requested a review in my thread, but I do believe all of the things I had wanted to say Interstella already said. I love how ...
Dec 6, 2018 -
Re: A Small Town Near the Great Lakes
Hey! This is quite an interesting short story, that leaves me with more questions than answers towards the end. Actually, the ending feels like a cliff hanger of a chapter ...
Dec 3, 2018 -
Re: Stay Away From the Deep Spots, Kid
Hey! I love this poem because of the great detail you've enforced and the imagery. What i think would help this poem become even better is to have it in ...
Dec 3, 2018 -
Re: The Day
Hey! If this is a true story I am so sorry and I definitely identify with these feelings so if you ever need to talk let me know. I think ...
Nov 27, 2018 -
Re: Trigger
Hey! I love the title of this poem, it's why I chose to read it, and I am so glad I did. I hope this is just a fictional piece ...
Nov 27, 2018 -
Re: Take Me Away
Hey! :) Here for a review and if you ever need anything feel free to send me a message. Right off the bat I love this poem because one of ...
Nov 27, 2018 -
Re: my friends
Hey! Here for a review :) This is cute just the way it is, but just a tad suggestion: maybe elaborate on what your friends didn't witness. Did he caress ...
Nov 26, 2018 -
Re: Behold the Cherry blossom trees
Hey! I love the rhythm of this poem, very whimsical and love like. I think the poem itself just a great job of personifying cherry blossom trees without meaning too. ...
Apr 15, 2018 -
Re: Bad Days
Hey! I love the simplicity of this poem and it's general message! Quite often the days I think will be fantastic are the days that kick my butt. I think ...
Apr 15, 2018 -
Re: ShaikhTheWorld
HI! I thought I would return the favor! This is such a creative way to introduce yourself! I simply cannot wait to read some of your work because I can ...
Mar 17, 2018
