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Hey, Thank you so much for the request :) . This was a very pleasent read. Your imagery is so powerful. The only thing I didn't like is that the ...

Hey, Thanks for the request :). I think your previous reviewers did a fine job picking out your grammar mistakes, so I won't focus on them; plus, I don't really ...

Hey, Here I am again! :) I love the fact that this chapter is from the boy's point of view. There were a quite bit more grammar mistakes in this ...

Hey, I love the way you use description in this chapter. I have not read chapter one and two yet, but I will after this because I liked it so ...

Here to review chapter :) Surprise Is this the title of the chapter? If not, it serves no purpose being here. Heather and Bri met me at the door when ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. I won't be harsh, I promise. Also, I would like to encourage you to review other peoples work as well. They work just as ...

Hey, I'm honored to be amoung your first reviewer. Don't take anything I say too harshly :) On to your review: My eyes moved over her what used to be ...

Hello, Thanks for requesting a review, but of course I can't comment on plot progression or character development because I haven't read the chapters previous to this. I love how ...

Hey, Thanks for the request. :) There were a couple things I want you to show in this poem to make it more powerful: images and lots of description. I ...

Hey, Here as requested. You've had some great reviews so far, and I feel as though what i have to say is being redundant. So, I won't go all out, ...

Hello and Welcome back :) This is so short, really short. Maybe try lengthening it just a tad, and the repetition on taclon in the first couple of lines disrupts ...

Hell and Welcome to YWS, I hope you find your way around easily enough, but if you ever have any questions or need a review please write on my wall ...

Hey, I really enjoyed this poem. You seem to have an awesome grasp on rhythming! But, there are two things that I would like to point out: I sure was ...

Hello, I am here to review your short story. I hope I am not to harsh because I just want you to be the best reader that you can be. ...

Hey, How ironic, in english class we just got done reading Antigone (the play). I loved your poem. It was very entertaining. I hope you get a good grade. Somethings ...