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  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: A place between several seas

    Hi Pompadour, This is a cool poem, really cool. I love how you can imagine yourself as a tree. It's so cool. Part 1 This has an amazing opening, "my ...

    Jan 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: I Misplaced My Extrovert

    Hi, I love this poem I love the fact that you're so brutally honest about what you want in a friendship, which I couldn't ask for; you also sound like ...

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Crystal Shards

    Hi, WrittenByTyler! This is such a heart warming story. I can imagine the narrator to be quite young, and for a lot of people the youth are a massive problem. ...

    Jul 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Guru's Apprentice (Part 1)

    Hi roeckercody, This is a brilliant start to this story, it makes me want to find out more about the Guru, and how exactly he does his job. There are ...

    Jul 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Humor Re: Norah.

    Hi, this is brilliant, it's probably what I'd be like at uni. As I live in Cambridge, I just want to point out a few things about the city; you ...

    Jul 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hexamon ~ 1

    Welcome to YWS, This is a very good story; the message behind it is one which I think a few people need to learn at some point in their lives. ...

    Jun 26, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Humor, General Re: Two Things That Might Influence Your Child

    Ha, Ha. This is funny. I love the cynicism; I find that it's always the best way for comedy, along with satire -which was used- and sarcasm -which was also ...

    Jun 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Just a Moment

    Wow, my spine has gone tingly. That was amazing; not only is is beautifully written, it gives you an amazing sense of what it feels like. I've never had a ...

    Jun 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: My spectrum

    This poem sums up a lot of feelings about life, and about what we think when we are pensive; and that feeling that you get. Spine chilling. Although I spotted ...

    Jun 15, 2015
  • Other » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Dear Disney Pricnesses

    I love this letter! Although I have to disagree with some of it; if Belle hadn't helped the beast then he would have been like that forever, and if Pocahontas ...

    Jun 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Satire, Satire Re: Life a canvass of oppurtunity

    This is an incredibly heart warming piece of writing; I love the way you captured her downfall in the people around her, and in how she rose back above it. ...

    Jun 9, 2015
  • Other » Other, General Re: Leaders. -> feed back would be great :)

    Thank you so much, that was really inspiring; I loved what you wrote and how you described who you're inspired by. It really makes clear what qualities are needed in ...

    Jun 8, 2015


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