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Re: A place between several seas
Hi Pompadour, This is a cool poem, really cool. I love how you can imagine yourself as a tree. It's so cool. Part 1 This has an amazing opening, "my ...
Jan 21, 2016 -
Re: I Misplaced My Extrovert
Hi, I love this poem I love the fact that you're so brutally honest about what you want in a friendship, which I couldn't ask for; you also sound like ...
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: Crystal Shards
Hi, WrittenByTyler! This is such a heart warming story. I can imagine the narrator to be quite young, and for a lot of people the youth are a massive problem. ...
Jul 30, 2015 -
Re: The Guru's Apprentice (Part 1)
Hi roeckercody, This is a brilliant start to this story, it makes me want to find out more about the Guru, and how exactly he does his job. There are ...
Jul 25, 2015 -
Re: Norah.
Hi, this is brilliant, it's probably what I'd be like at uni. As I live in Cambridge, I just want to point out a few things about the city; you ...
Jul 5, 2015 -
Re: Hexamon ~ 1
Welcome to YWS, This is a very good story; the message behind it is one which I think a few people need to learn at some point in their lives. ...
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: Two Things That Might Influence Your Child
Ha, Ha. This is funny. I love the cynicism; I find that it's always the best way for comedy, along with satire -which was used- and sarcasm -which was also ...
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: Just a Moment
Wow, my spine has gone tingly. That was amazing; not only is is beautifully written, it gives you an amazing sense of what it feels like. I've never had a ...
Jun 22, 2015 -
Re: My spectrum
This poem sums up a lot of feelings about life, and about what we think when we are pensive; and that feeling that you get. Spine chilling. Although I spotted ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: Dear Disney Pricnesses
I love this letter! Although I have to disagree with some of it; if Belle hadn't helped the beast then he would have been like that forever, and if Pocahontas ...
Jun 14, 2015 -
Re: Life a canvass of oppurtunity
This is an incredibly heart warming piece of writing; I love the way you captured her downfall in the people around her, and in how she rose back above it. ...
Jun 9, 2015 -
Re: Leaders. -> feed back would be great :)
Thank you so much, that was really inspiring; I loved what you wrote and how you described who you're inspired by. It really makes clear what qualities are needed in ...
Jun 8, 2015
