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  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: A place between several seas

    Hi Pompadour, This is a cool poem, really cool. I love how you can imagine yourself as a tree. It's so cool. Part 1 This has an amazing opening, "my ...

    Jan 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: I Misplaced My Extrovert

    Hi, I love this poem I love the fact that you're so brutally honest about what you want in a friendship, which I couldn't ask for; you also sound like ...

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Crystal Shards

    Hi, WrittenByTyler! This is such a heart warming story. I can imagine the narrator to be quite young, and for a lot of people the youth are a massive problem. ...

    Jul 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Guru's Apprentice (Part 1)

    Hi roeckercody, This is a brilliant start to this story, it makes me want to find out more about the Guru, and how exactly he does his job. There are ...

    Jul 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Humor Re: Norah.

    Hi, this is brilliant, it's probably what I'd be like at uni. As I live in Cambridge, I just want to point out a few things about the city; you ...

    Jul 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hexamon ~ 1

    Welcome to YWS, This is a very good story; the message behind it is one which I think a few people need to learn at some point in their lives. ...

    Jun 26, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Humor, General Re: Two Things That Might Influence Your Child

    Ha, Ha. This is funny. I love the cynicism; I find that it's always the best way for comedy, along with satire -which was used- and sarcasm -which was also ...

    Jun 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Just a Moment

    Wow, my spine has gone tingly. That was amazing; not only is is beautifully written, it gives you an amazing sense of what it feels like. I've never had a ...

    Jun 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: My spectrum

    This poem sums up a lot of feelings about life, and about what we think when we are pensive; and that feeling that you get. Spine chilling. Although I spotted ...

    Jun 15, 2015
  • Other » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Dear Disney Pricnesses

    I love this letter! Although I have to disagree with some of it; if Belle hadn't helped the beast then he would have been like that forever, and if Pocahontas ...

    Jun 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Satire, Satire Re: Life a canvass of oppurtunity

    This is an incredibly heart warming piece of writing; I love the way you captured her downfall in the people around her, and in how she rose back above it. ...

    Jun 9, 2015
  • Other » Other, General Re: Leaders. -> feed back would be great :)

    Thank you so much, that was really inspiring; I loved what you wrote and how you described who you're inspired by. It really makes clear what qualities are needed in ...

    Jun 8, 2015


No man or woman who tries to pursue an ideal in his or her own way is without enemies.
— Daisy Bates