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Hey there! I myself am thinking about trying this short poem contest. I hope I can be of some help for you! 1: Exposed Good start here. 13 words, 79 ...

I very much enjoyed reading this. I can feel this poem. It very much reminds me of something that is so beautiful yet dark. If there would be one thing ...

Very cute and charming. I recommend you change the first line's punctuation to a comma, though. It would make it flow better. I do like the humorous feel, it is ...

Such and emotional poem. Beautiful! I love the simplicity and remorseful feel. This poem speaks so much of sadness. I really cannot find a thing to be changed. You have ...

Nice poem. I like it. You have nice imagery and such. Good flow and no spelling errors. Although, I have to ask, why no Punctuation? I have this weird thing ...

Hello there, Yazi! To start things off, this is a great poem! You have beautiful rhyme, and everything flows perfectly. Your imagery is spectacular! There really is not much to ...

Howdy! Since this is a shorter poem, I am going to dissect it stanza by stanza. Let us get started, shall we? "Call them as they are; the bastards and ...

Very creative poem you have here! Great imagery and such. I like how you describe everything, and you really bring me into the poem with that second word: "Finesse". It's ...

Hello, Blackwood! Great job with the imagery in this piece! You really make me feel this 'migraine'. Is that really how they feel? I have a new respect for all ...

Hello there, dear! Nicely done poem! I like how you formatted the stanzas, very cool. On to the helpful stuff: Something you need to keep in mind is that with ...

Coolio. Nice job! First things first: I really like the imagery you put into this. You give a very clear picture, with lots of detail and attention. I noticed you ...

Ooh. Nice! I love the subject matter. You defiantly portray the right feeling to go along with it. I like how you formatted this, and even though you didn't really ...

To start off with, very nice message you have going on here. I like your use of words, like Ivy said. You have a nice start here. One thing I ...

I think we have real, truly brilliant writer on our hands. You have grown into a great writer! I was instantly sucked in, and could not manage to tear my ...

Wow! Impressive work! I love the form. You have a great flow, and I absolutely love the simple rhyming scheme you have going on. One thing though: The second to ...