Raindeer

Hey :) What a mysterious prologue! Sounds very exciting and I can't wait to see how this story will progress. I extremely loved the relationship between Elodie and her father. ...

Hi, Em~! What a wonderful story! Just going to come out here and say very quickly that this reminded me of Steinbeck's novella The Pearl which I just recently read ...

Yo, amiga! What's up? Despite what you said, I think this was a pretty solid chapter. Not the *best* but definitely not awful. Let's dive in, shall we? It was ...

Hey Rachel :) What a lovely beginning to the story! I love the plot so far and it's just so... dreamy and amazing. Cute, sweet, and definitely seeming like it's ...

Hey, Rachel! ^-^ Okay, I'm a lot better today, my review will [hopefully] be better than last chapters xD So, yay! Eloise and Gabriel talked. I've been waiting for this ...

Hey there! I loved this chapter :O The connection with Gabriel and Eloise was so awesome and I could totally feel the anxiety boiling inside Eloise. Loved the drama there. ...

Hi! I wasn't tagged but thought I could be of some assistance~ I'm on my phone (my laptop ran out of battery) so sorry for any weird format/typos. Off we ...

Hey, I love Percy Jackson and the Olympians/Heroes of Olympus! Hopefully my review today will help you in the future of writing fan fictions~! All right-o, I'm going to start ...

Hey there! Rain here for a quick review. I'm not the best at reviewing poetry, but I'm going to try today for your lovely poem here~ I found this to ...

Hi! Here to review this for the first time! I'll start with nitpicks -- Strangely enough, the student’s didn’t make much out of her running down the stone halls. *students ...

Hello again! Rain here for another review. :D The stars were out: infinite little specks of silver against the pitch-black, velvety sky. This is a very beautiful piece of imagery! ...

Hi, again! Happy Review Day! :) So at first, I thought Bridget had social anxiety (seemed very much so in the first chapter) but now, I'm doubting it. It seems ...

Hey, there, Eros! Ah, lovely poem for your Mohit ;) I really loved this piece, it was interesting and you took the whole "hey I love you" kind of theme ...

Ohh, no! Poor Kaelin. D: What's coming up for her can't be good! I don't have much to say about this chapter, other than I extremely enjoyed it! I've seen ...

AHA YES ONCE UPON A TIME. *ahem* Hello there! Rain here to review your splendid fan fiction. :) Season 5 is killing me like omg. I really love your character ...