Raindeer

Hey! Happy Thursday! :D This was quite the interesting read! I'm especially digging the ending; it felt like it pulled together the story nicely. Though flying towards the sunset seems ...

Hey regismare! Wow, so this was quite the read. I think I'm in love with your characters already. The instant the girl was described I knew she would make for ...

Yo, felistia! Suspenseful chapter! We get some interaction between Zoltar and the Exltron. It really felt very evil; the amount of suspense and the descriptions really added to the scariness ...

Hey there! This is a pretty interesting start to your story and I'm sure will make for a cool concept. Magic and magicians are always so fun to read about! ...

Hey-o! I really like Shiraku's bitterness in this chapter, as well as how it connects to the whole history of the Shadow Talon's (probably why she has been so bitter!). ...

Hey there! I'm on my phone, so please excuse any weird typos or something! :p I loved the interactions with Shiraku and Felistia in this chapter, as well as the ...

Hey there, EnderFlash! I thought this was a pretty good start to your story! We get introduced to Abel - who I'm guessing is the main character - and some ...

Hello! Huh... interesting chapter. The Fangtars are... evil. xP Unless this Wisp Talon is lying, but I'm guessing that's not the case. “Oh and one other thing,” she paused, looking ...

Hey there! I see you're new to YWS! Welcome. I'm pretty new to poetry, but I'll try to give you the best feedback possible! It's also a fairly short poem ...

Hey there! Rain here for a review. Since this is a pretty short piece, there's less to review but I'll try and touch on all my thoughts! 1) The run-on ...

Hi felistia! I apologize for any typos; I'm doing this review on my phone because I've got no internet. This chapter was nice; it was much more description and imagery ...

Hello! Yay! Friends! Well, maybe not friends... but... other dragons, haha. I'm very excited to see how Zoltar's relationships will develop with the two of them. I'm fond of Shiraku ...

Hey there! Okay, I'm just going to start this review off with: I love this. The beginning was splendid even without knowing Rain Town was the symbolism for death, and ...

Hey there! I was a bit skeptical to review this at first because I wasn't sure how. I've never read anything quite like this. I have a few thoughts/a bit ...

Hi, felistia! It's been quite a few days, but I'm back! I love the battle scene we have between Zoltar and the Shang Fu. It's intense, and the ending really ...