Raindeer

WHAT UP ! Sorry I'm a bit late with this, a lot of my motivation has disappeared. Anyway, what a fun action-packed chapter! I think my favorite part was towards ...

Hey there! Woohoo for more Harry and Rose banter! I am seriously loving these two. Right now there’s a nice balance between the silliness and teasing in their relationship as ...

Hello!! You get the honor of receiving my last review needed for Team Tortoise, hurrah! Rose and Harry are so fun to read about. I’m sensing some possible ~romance~ between ...

Hello! Wait, omg, so are ghosts frequent in this world? That’s what it’s seeming like, especially based off this comment: Which, obviously, was a little weird, but he wasn’t a ...

Hey Mage!! OH MY GOSH, I love this so far. The sticky summer air into set the tone so well. I can’t exactly place it—I wouldn’t say dreary or lazy, ...

Moo! Hello Cow! Here for a short #TeamTortoise review. I really like this idea of tracing back to past years of our lives—and reflecting and reminiscing on what happened. I ...

Hi there! I haven’t reviewed other portions, I hope that’s okay. Let’s jump in! Nuddia let lose a small growl, her long thin tail flicking behind her as she crouched ...

Hiya! This is an interesting story! I think the journal-approach is really fascinating and can lend itself a great way to get inside the character’s head, and I like that ...

Heya lulon! I’m going to try my best to review this, but I’m not the best poetry reviewer so take my thoughts with a grain of salt. First off, I ...

Hiya MoonIris! Ooooh, what an intriguing little prologue. It makes me wonder whose perspective it's from. It's got a really negative tone to it, very ominous too. It works as ...

Hi Haraya! I don't normally review poetry just because I'm not as familiar with it as prose, but seeing as it's Team Tortoise, what better way to branch out? I ...

Hey there Kiami! Interesting piece, and it’s a bit unlike what I normally review but I’ll give it a go! I really like the vocabulary used here; it creates an ...

Hey there Legolas! Here for Team Tortoise. "No, no, no, it's noodle time" shouted grandpa. Aww!!! This made me smile. Noodle time :D Dee maybe there is someone who is ...

Hey Prim Rose! First of all, a late welcome to YWS! I hope you’re enjoying the site!! So, I want to start off by saying that I’m loving this premise. ...

Ah! More Evelyn. I like that we’re getting to see more of her character and her character’s circumstances. I think her character’s development is also especially good right now because ...