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  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Dramatic Re: Shadows In The Dark~ Chapter 1

    Hello there! Rain here for a review on this mighty fine Review Day. :) I'm all for a good mystery/supernatural story which is what initially drew me to this! I ...

    Feb 24, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: ORWEO (Working Title) 1.1

    Hey there! I don't think I've ever actually gotten the chance to review your work! So here I am. Glad I'm catching this at the beginning. :D I first want ...

    Feb 5, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: 3 AM

    Hi there! Okay, so, WOAH. Plot twist there at the end. O-O I really liked that ending. I think it was effective, smart, and lacks the perfect punch with the ...

    Jan 10, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: A little bit of love.

    Hi CJ! Let’s hop right into it! Firstly, this is a lovely story! Cute romance where two people meet in a coffee shop = my favorite! I like how one ...

    Jan 10, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 22 (LMS IV)

    Hi Shady! Here as requested. Okay, so even without having read previous chapters, this was a smooth and easy read! I think it part had to do with the dialogue, ...

    Jan 9, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: waffle house

    Hey there! Here as requested. So, I really loved this! I like how there’s a pretty constant theme throughout the story - the idea to make choice and a sense ...

    Jan 9, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter 1

    Hey there! Welcome to YWS. I love your username and avatar. :D What drew me to this was the fact that it is the first chapter in your novel! I've ...

    Jan 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: 生日快乐-"Happy Birthday" - 1

    Hey, manilla! Rain here for a review. Since this piece is pretty short, I'll do my best to review everything I can! (However, I'm completely unfamiliar with Chinese, unfortunately, so ...

    Jan 4, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: No more tears (Draft 3.0)

    Hey! Sorry this is a bit late. I finally got around to it. This will probably be shorter than normal because I've already reviewed the previous draft. Anyway, here we ...

    Dec 28, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Literature Re: Rain

    Hi there! I'm a fan of short stories, and I also saw this title and it drew me in ;) Also, I'm doing this instead of writing my essay, haha. ...

    Dec 18, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Blue Arrows ~ Chapter 4 ~ Truth

    Hi! So, I think this chapter did a bit better in terms of pacing. Plus, we get to see a bit more of Eri's skills and her interactions with other ...

    Dec 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Blue Arrows ~ Chapter 3 ~ Quest

    YO YO YO. Sorry this is so late! But it's still in the green room... surprisingly! The first thing I wanted to say was how this gives me Narnia vibes. ...

    Dec 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: Honey and Sunshine

    Hello! Here as requested. Though fair warning, I really haven't done many poetry reviews and I don't read enough poetry to know the ins and outs - but I can ...

    Dec 15, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: No more tears

    Hi! Here as requested. I’m going to discuss some of my thoughts and then address the question! Okay, so I read this a total of 2 times. The first I ...

    Dec 13, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: One: Silence

    Hi there! What really attracted me to this was the fact that it was a novel chapter (yay!) and a teen fiction drama (even BETTER!). I love contemporary YA - ...

    Dec 3, 2018


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