Raindeer

Hi there! Okay, so, WOAH. Plot twist there at the end. O-O I really liked that ending. I think it was effective, smart, and lacks the perfect punch with the ...

Hi CJ! Let’s hop right into it! Firstly, this is a lovely story! Cute romance where two people meet in a coffee shop = my favorite! I like how one ...

Hi Shady! Here as requested. Okay, so even without having read previous chapters, this was a smooth and easy read! I think it part had to do with the dialogue, ...

Hey there! Here as requested. So, I really loved this! I like how there’s a pretty constant theme throughout the story - the idea to make choice and a sense ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS. I love your username and avatar. :D What drew me to this was the fact that it is the first chapter in your novel! I've ...

Hey, manilla! Rain here for a review. Since this piece is pretty short, I'll do my best to review everything I can! (However, I'm completely unfamiliar with Chinese, unfortunately, so ...

Hey! Sorry this is a bit late. I finally got around to it. This will probably be shorter than normal because I've already reviewed the previous draft. Anyway, here we ...

Hi there! I'm a fan of short stories, and I also saw this title and it drew me in ;) Also, I'm doing this instead of writing my essay, haha. ...

Hi! So, I think this chapter did a bit better in terms of pacing. Plus, we get to see a bit more of Eri's skills and her interactions with other ...

YO YO YO. Sorry this is so late! But it's still in the green room... surprisingly! The first thing I wanted to say was how this gives me Narnia vibes. ...

Hello! Here as requested. Though fair warning, I really haven't done many poetry reviews and I don't read enough poetry to know the ins and outs - but I can ...

Hi! Here as requested. I’m going to discuss some of my thoughts and then address the question! Okay, so I read this a total of 2 times. The first I ...

Hi there! What really attracted me to this was the fact that it was a novel chapter (yay!) and a teen fiction drama (even BETTER!). I love contemporary YA - ...

Hi there! I hope I'm submitting this review in time and before this is due! Since this is a school work, I'm going to focus a bit more on grammar/syntax ...

Hey zaminami! Hopefully this review is helpful to you as you make any small edits for your contest. Or you can totally disregard my feedback haha. :P Cecilia stared at ...