Raindeer

Hi creeper! Yay, some more backstory on the mysterious woman in black. So, my impression here is that Peyton "created" this woman by dreaming her up. Creepy! However, this makes ...

Hi creeper! This has been in the green room for a while so I’m to review. I see that this is part of your Zombies of Mariesville series—so is Oliver ...

Hi Scarlett! OMG, the TENSION! I haven't read any, so this comparison may fall flat, but this reminds me so much of danmei (a friend of mine is obsessed with ...

Hey Vergil! I was looking through the green room for a short story/book chapter and stumbled upon yours, which sounded like something I'd like. Immediately I love the tone and ...

Hi Phoenix! To begin, welcome to YWS. I've been MIA myself for several years now, so just getting back into the groove of things, but if you have any questions, ...

Hi christina! I love the philosophical nature of this essay, especially in the context of memes and humans' tendency to assign meaning and label to things. I agree with a ...

Hi creeperfeverdreams! This is my first YWS review in a loong time, so let's dive right in. I see your comment below that this is connected to a previous work, ...

Hi Charm!! First of all, the title really intrigued me; I love anything to do with fairies and the charming whimsical-ness of this type of fantasy. I also really enjoyed ...

Hey Vil and Stringbean! I meant to get to this a lot sooner, so I'm sorry I'm late. :( Anyway, first thing I want to comment on is the title. ...

Hi LZ! Ooooh, so we're introduced to main character #2! Ruby seems like an interesting character. I feel like I remember you mentioning she goes to NYU in one of ...

Hiya LZ! Perfect timing for this chapter which is taking place as Abby boards this mysterious train... I am currently listening to train & rain ambience sounds in the background. ...

Hi LZ! I've been really excited to get the chance to read this, and I'm so happy you posted it! Let's get right into it! Likewise, the Shermans were the ...

Hi there! I haven't read the first part of the chapter, I'm just jumping into this right here! I hope that's okay. Despite not having read the first part, I ...

Hi Liberty!!! Happy RevMo! This gets the honor of being the review that gets me my second blue star hehe. Anyway, let’s get into it! Pebble sped up, pines trees ...

Hi Harry! Nice start of the chapter... I’m very curious how the rest of this will play out. So far I think the pacing is well done, although there were ...