RainWanderer

Something feels off in the ending. He jumped when the doors were forced open. He looked up, and a man smiled down. "Hey. The elevator broke down. Luckily, it was ...

As nit-picking on grammar and spelling errors was never my specialty, I will go straight ahead to my impression of the story. There is an eerie, and yet alluring feel ...

I hope this is not something that had happened to you, and I hope you won't mind if I treat this as a story, not a personal recollection. I can ...

Sorry, I don't like your story, because of these reasons: 1.Because of Twilight, now everything that include a vampire or werewolf element in it instantly got a negative impression on ...

You have done a very nice job, I can feel the emotions brimming inside this short piece. How dreamers will one day face their reality...very interestingly dark and demotivational topic, ...

For a sex scene, yes, it was quite uninteresting. Too short, too fast, and lack of details and emotions. Describe more on the movement, the heat, the sound, the sense, ...

The whole event happens to him in this chapter and how he was always lonely in Valentine's day(which was also mentioned) are the reasons why that Valentine's day the worst ...

As requested, here I am, reviewing your story without mercy. :twisted: Well,may I reword this a little as review? Click the spoilers for my review of your errors, it is ...

Hello! You seem like a new member. I could never thought that I would find out your story on Y!Answer like this! Is it...fate? Ok, i was joking, now to ...

Beautiful. Absolutely stunningly beautiful story. Seem like I was too late to give any review though, because everyone else had said everything I wanted to say. So I guess all ...

A parody of a fairy tale! I love this idea. When something that have been told millions of time in the same way like the original Hansel and Gretel, it ...

And im here for the 3rd part of "The Regiments"! And 1st one to review too! Yay for me! =D Now lets see... She slipped her leather gloves on , ...

Let me see...this story remind me of Final Fantansy series, with all those names. Shiva, Kyle, Tidus, Reno...those name instantly trigger something in a 3Fs(Final Fantansy Fan) like me. The ...

*deep breath*....Ok, I have calmed myself down...but....THIS STORY IS SO FUNNY!!!!*rolling around laughing again* Well, sorry for the long absence, but I have exams and my own story to write. ...

Hi cookies! I got your PM, and here I am reading your story again! =D(although it is just the prologue, I still like it!) Some of what I want to ...