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RainGrae

RainGrae

  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Rain and Tears

    Hello, Rain Grae here! I like the mysterious atmosphere this short poem has created. I really like the last four line because it ends the poem perfectly. The rhythm dies ...

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The Fall

    This poem basically describes the ups and downs of life. It vividly portrays how there are people who will help you rise when you fall. I love how you related ...

    Apr 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: What do you do?

    Hey! I wouldn't mind reviewing this piece at all :). In fact, I like the idea of it. Although there is a concern I have. The poem asks the reader ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: When Worlds Meet

    I love the words you used to create this short poem. The concept was well portrayed through the relation with our universe. It's a nice love poem as well of ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Dear Angel

    This poem is truly amazing. The words you chose seemed out-reaching. It is simple yet sophisticated and beautiful. I like the idea of this angel you speak to, about dreams, ...

    Jan 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Why I Write

    What a wonderful poem. I love the way you constructed your poem. How it flowed your message along. I like how you chose to start with a question and worked ...

    Aug 4, 2012
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: A Whispered Lullaby

    Hello W&W :) For a poem so short, it was well written. It has so much story behind it that the poem becomes a mystery. But I suggest you should ...

    Aug 4, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I am

    This seemed like a carefully written poem. I love every detail that you put into it, and every thought that you spoke about. All the ideas connected with me, like ...

    Aug 4, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: The Place I Love

    This is a great poem. It certainly gives me a different perspective about the city life. I too live in the city, and its busy streets seem to blind me ...

    Jul 28, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Dark Side Of Dreaming

    Hello ^_^ I like the poem you wrote. I can see the message you were trying to convey. The choice of words are very poetic, vague but at the same ...

    Jul 28, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Abandoned

    I enjoyed this poem very much. I like how the poem created a mysterious aura until the very end. Your choice of words made it sound more dramatic. I suggest ...

    Jul 28, 2012


I think the more you understand myths, the more you understand the roots of our culture and the more things will resonate.
— Rick Riordan