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Re: Rain and Tears
Hello, Rain Grae here! I like the mysterious atmosphere this short poem has created. I really like the last four line because it ends the poem perfectly. The rhythm dies ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: The Fall
This poem basically describes the ups and downs of life. It vividly portrays how there are people who will help you rise when you fall. I love how you related ...
Apr 30, 2013 -
Re: What do you do?
Hey! I wouldn't mind reviewing this piece at all :). In fact, I like the idea of it. Although there is a concern I have. The poem asks the reader ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: When Worlds Meet
I love the words you used to create this short poem. The concept was well portrayed through the relation with our universe. It's a nice love poem as well of ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Dear Angel
This poem is truly amazing. The words you chose seemed out-reaching. It is simple yet sophisticated and beautiful. I like the idea of this angel you speak to, about dreams, ...
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: Why I Write
What a wonderful poem. I love the way you constructed your poem. How it flowed your message along. I like how you chose to start with a question and worked ...
Aug 4, 2012 -
Re: A Whispered Lullaby
Hello W&W :) For a poem so short, it was well written. It has so much story behind it that the poem becomes a mystery. But I suggest you should ...
Aug 4, 2012 -
Re: I am
This seemed like a carefully written poem. I love every detail that you put into it, and every thought that you spoke about. All the ideas connected with me, like ...
Aug 4, 2012 -
Re: The Place I Love
This is a great poem. It certainly gives me a different perspective about the city life. I too live in the city, and its busy streets seem to blind me ...
Jul 28, 2012 -
Re: The Dark Side Of Dreaming
Hello ^_^ I like the poem you wrote. I can see the message you were trying to convey. The choice of words are very poetic, vague but at the same ...
Jul 28, 2012 -
Re: Abandoned
I enjoyed this poem very much. I like how the poem created a mysterious aura until the very end. Your choice of words made it sound more dramatic. I suggest ...
Jul 28, 2012
