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Re: Above It All
Hey, just wanted to offer a review. Firstly, I just wanna say that this was a very good story. Clearly, a lot of thought went into this and it's also ...
Jun 19, 2013 -
Re: The Extraordinaires
Hi...just wanted to offer a review. Firstly, the tone of this story is superb. It captures the very essence of youthfulness - carefree, light, and yet filled with a sort ...
Jun 17, 2013 -
Re: Writers All
Hey InkBlot, this is an excellent poem. Firstly, kudos to you for writing about yourself. It's kinda vain, but still awesome, lol. I like the gigantic scope of this poem, ...
Jun 16, 2013 -
Re: Your Weapon Versus Mine
Hello there...just wanna pass out some compliments. Now, the first amazing thing about this piece is the fact that you are able to channel the emotional force behind what must ...
Jun 16, 2013 -
Re: My cat, Choobee
Lol. I love this. The best thing about the poem is the tone and voice of the persona - which is the cat. This voice carries the entire poem, and ...
Jun 16, 2013 -
Re: Twisted Demeanor
I think I once read somewhere that if one is writing about a tree, then the last thing that should be mentioned in the piece is the word "tree." You ...
Jun 16, 2013 -
Re: Humans
Hey there. In my opinion, it kinda seems as though you're presenting a somewhat untrue portrait of human beings. While you take great care to describe humans as a positive, ...
Jun 16, 2013 -
Re: Words Are Words
Okay, so here goes... The way you alternate lines that highlight the good and bad functions of words is well-done. There is an smooth sort of simplicity in this poem. ...
Jun 16, 2013 -
Re: Hurricane
On one level it seems as though the poem is written from the perspective of the hurricane, and you do a beautiful job of describing all aspects of a "hurricane." ...
Jun 16, 2013
