Raelyn723

Wow. This was really, really good. The way you described everything was perfect and, despite me and my aversion to swearing, I think you used the words at the right ...

I really liked this!! Not much of a poetry person, but this was interesting and I could really relate to it. Your simile with the forehead like the crinkled notebook ...

I am definitely not a poetry expert or anything but this is a really great poem. I loved the rhyming in it and the way it flowed. Normally it bugs ...

This is great, just like the first chapter! I have to point out that you kept calling Abott by different names, which was really confusing. You called him Alistar and ...

This. Is. Amazing. I was hooked the whole way through. I loved the way you described Briar without being too overwhelming on the details, and I loved how you created ...

Wow. This is really good. Since it is an excerpt I won't overly explain this, but I wish we had a little more description of what she means when she ...

This is intriguing. I really liked the beginning and how it makes the reader on the edge of their seat before you even bring in the character. I also really ...

Wow. This is outstanding! I love the way you explained how he came to be in the army and how you didn't really go into details about what happened there. ...

This is a really well-written story. I loved the little hints of suspense when you had to wait to find out what they were doing in the hospital. I also ...

I like this story a lot, but honestly, it's a little confusing. You left out commas in a lot of places that they needed to be, so it took away ...

Wow. This is really amazing. It's really relatable and I can feel exactly what your talking about! I really like the way you kept the beginning of each stanza the ...

I really really liked this poem! You have a lot of strong emotions in it and it stands out from the other ones I have read from other people. I ...