RadicalCarrot

I really enjoyed this story but I have a few minor nitpicks. First off, and I realize you've hear this before, but it was incredibly repetitive. I understand that the ...

I actually really enjoyed this story and I felt like something I would love to review. I'm mainly going to look at elements that are not grammar (because my own ...

Hi! I'm Radical Carrot and oh boy was this story a doozy but I'll try to review it anyways. Characters: I'll be honest, like everyone else this story was confusing ...

Hello Lumos! I really enjoyed this story and wanted to review it. Unfortunately, I'm not great at nitpicks when it comes to grammar or sentence structure either. This review will ...

This art is incredible! I love the line work a lot. The characters are interesting. They seem to have very small color palettes which I think is a good choice ...

I really enjoyed this. While it was short, it seemed like a clip of something much bigger. Like a blip in these people's lives who had super deep character to ...

This is incredible! I enjoy how you looped the story around and showed how the cycle would start again. I also enjoyed the perspective you chose to write this from. ...

Interesting to read. This is very speculative and I'll admit, depressing. It was clearly thought out and made some very interesting points. However, in some parts it was a little ...

Incredibly gripping. I'll admit, I had no idea what I was walking into then I opened this up. The story was short to the point and achieved what it wanted ...