RCampbell

How immensely beautiful. you've created a wonderful piece of prose and I applaud you on your artistic depiction of depression. It has the power to make someone view themselves and ...

I could not for the life of me determine exactly what it is the poem depicts..... ....but that being said, It was fantastic. The imagery was among the most vivid ...

I could not for the life of me determine exactly what it is the poem depicts..... ....but that being said, It was fantastic. The imagery was among the most vivid ...

You are quite clearly an artist. Am I right? The very first line of this prose caught my attention and the rest held it tightly. So very beautiful. So immensely ...

If this is the introduction of a concept for a story, then it could prove to be promising. The idea of forbidden love and the life that ensues is an ...

Mr. Locke already touched on many things that needed to be said but I'll throw in my two cents, too. I very much agree with Mr. Locke in that there ...

Mr. Locke already touched on many things that needed to be said but I'll throw in my two cents, too. I very much agree with Mr. Locke in that there ...

I am relieved to have found a well formatted piece of work, first and foremost. All the writing on this site lacking breaks and punctuation are nothing less than a ...

What is the key to life? A question we all want answer, for certain. But for know lets focus on the key to this piece. We have a father and ...

Hmmm... Well this is rather gruesome. But hey, I'm not beyond enjoying a good horror story every once in a while. However, I think a problem lies and the lack ...

Alright then, lets get to work on this one with some constructive criticism. To be frank, this is very difficult to read. Formatting is practically non-existent. Simply for the sake ...