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QuietRoman

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Chained Heart

    I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) This poem was really good, and I loved the imagery of the heart! However, I found just a few ...

    Jul 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Defiance

    I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) Wow, that was really an excellent poem. I agree with HomeschooledTeen in that I don't really want to say ...

    Jul 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: Whose Pages Burn With These Attempts to Scrawl?

    I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) I've always loved villanelles, and I think yours is an excellent example of a villanelle done right. I think ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: alone on a summer night

    I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) Wow... as someone who has suffered from loneliness for a long time, I find that this poem really speaks ...

    Jul 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: because we are all lemmings

    I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) I find this poem very compelling, even though it is very short. In fact, I think its short length ...

    Jul 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: Humanity

    I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) This poem is, honestly, hard to read, not because of any inherent flaws in its structure, but because it ...

    Jul 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Once Believed

    I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) This poem is fantastic! The rhyming scheme and rhythm are both very good, and I love the themes of ...

    Jul 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Shadow~ Chapter 2 + Homo Flacus description.

    Wow, this is really interesting! The whole idea of a Homo Flacus is a very original and compelling one. I especially like the idea of 'Heat.' I would definitely like ...

    Jul 25, 2013


I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
— soundofmind