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Re: Chained Heart
I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) This poem was really good, and I loved the imagery of the heart! However, I found just a few ...
Jul 29, 2013 -
Re: Defiance
I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) Wow, that was really an excellent poem. I agree with HomeschooledTeen in that I don't really want to say ...
Jul 29, 2013 -
Re: Whose Pages Burn With These Attempts to Scrawl?
I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) I've always loved villanelles, and I think yours is an excellent example of a villanelle done right. I think ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: alone on a summer night
I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) Wow... as someone who has suffered from loneliness for a long time, I find that this poem really speaks ...
Jul 26, 2013 -
Re: because we are all lemmings
I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) I find this poem very compelling, even though it is very short. In fact, I think its short length ...
Jul 26, 2013 -
Re: Humanity
I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) This poem is, honestly, hard to read, not because of any inherent flaws in its structure, but because it ...
Jul 25, 2013 -
Re: I Once Believed
I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) This poem is fantastic! The rhyming scheme and rhythm are both very good, and I love the themes of ...
Jul 25, 2013 -
Re: The Shadow~ Chapter 2 + Homo Flacus description.
Wow, this is really interesting! The whole idea of a Homo Flacus is a very original and compelling one. I especially like the idea of 'Heat.' I would definitely like ...
Jul 25, 2013
