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QuietRoman

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Chained Heart

    I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) This poem was really good, and I loved the imagery of the heart! However, I found just a few ...

    Jul 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Defiance

    I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) Wow, that was really an excellent poem. I agree with HomeschooledTeen in that I don't really want to say ...

    Jul 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: Whose Pages Burn With These Attempts to Scrawl?

    I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) I've always loved villanelles, and I think yours is an excellent example of a villanelle done right. I think ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: alone on a summer night

    I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) Wow... as someone who has suffered from loneliness for a long time, I find that this poem really speaks ...

    Jul 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: because we are all lemmings

    I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) I find this poem very compelling, even though it is very short. In fact, I think its short length ...

    Jul 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: Humanity

    I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) This poem is, honestly, hard to read, not because of any inherent flaws in its structure, but because it ...

    Jul 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Once Believed

    I hope you don't mind if I review your poem. :) This poem is fantastic! The rhyming scheme and rhythm are both very good, and I love the themes of ...

    Jul 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Shadow~ Chapter 2 + Homo Flacus description.

    Wow, this is really interesting! The whole idea of a Homo Flacus is a very original and compelling one. I especially like the idea of 'Heat.' I would definitely like ...

    Jul 25, 2013


Thou call'dst me a dog before thou hadst cause. But, since I am a dog, beware my fangs.
— Shylock, The Merchant of Venice