Quetseli

This made me smile. :P Like everyone else, it was a serious and funny post. This is the first argument that I read that really didn't make (most) people mad ...

I love this poem. I'm not really good with poems and poem writing so I can't really give you a review with out a good knowledge. In truth, I think ...

No place is better. We all have our flaws. And I'm not being mean about it. Credit goes to the creator.

I think you're starting out with an idea in your head. But with idea is something of a climax to your story here and because of it your rushing the ...

I liked this. You did very well explaining to the reader what was happening and the conversation with the characters was very fluid. You kept the story moving at a ...

The entire time I was readin' this, the beat of the songs was in my head and the singer's voice was saying the lyrics!:lol: I was smilin' like a fool! ...

It's an interesting poem. I'm unsure of the story inside it, either if you are talking about a sickness or you are talking about something else. The last line is ...

I think this was really nice. I'm not perfect at judging poetry because i'm terrible at it myself. :p I'm more of a sci-fi writer. But you did good with ...

I think this is something different from what I read before. It's interesting and it makes question so much about the characters more then anything. I do wish to know ...

That's really strong. It ask so much of something that seems so small but is in fact so big in our lives. You were right to say that the question ...

I think it's a good story so far. You made the reader question about the man as well as leave off with a cliff hanger at the end, hightening suspension. ...

I think it's an interesting poem. The fact you made a hidden meaning to it makes it better. Maybe of a abusive relationship? I'm not completely sure, but that's how ...

It's a very interesting story. You seem to try and keep the reader wanting to read more by not full explaining and doing so later. You also describe things quite ...

I think it's a good start to a blooming story. There were a few grammar mistakes though, but they can be fixed. Another thing is near the beginning the woman, ...

I think it's a good start. You really keep the reader hooked by wanting to know more about what is going on, the time period, the protest. It's well described ...