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Nothing to say but well done. I could feel the emotion. Me likey.

Wow.

The 4,800 years is to correspond with the Bible, his boss being the Devil and all...

Mind=Blown

Originals are dead. They are the real zombies. When a person dies in any way (unless they are already Turned) they become and Original. Originals are only killed with head ...

It did make me think... That is quite a feat, making me think. You accomplished in a few moments what teachers and parents haven't accomplished in years. But come on, ...

Most of that was to go with the Boogeyman's uncaring, slightly awkward style of speaking. Thanks though!

Mind if I quote this? There were phrases that were so... elegant. I am going to use the line "It seems like someone has ripped a hole in the clouds." ...

*Positive review* I like it. Continue! It really interested me the whole way through.

I really liked the entire thing, except for the bolded thoughts. Don't bold them. It kinda threw me off. Italisize (SC?) them. Other than that, I liked it enough to ...

Made me cry. I love it when a poem does that. But since this is a reveiw, I am going to have to say: Check the spelling on a word ...

:) I loved it!

This whole thing was meant to be funny. I learned to write with the sentance, which contains every letter in the alphabet. T would repeat it over and over until ...

Thank you! I did have some imagery in there about how heavy the sword was and a big long three paragraph part where Dessa was lifted up and then sliced ...

Amen. The whole thing. I just wrote a big thing myself in the disscussions page about religion that sounded almost exactly like this, only you put it in the form ...