PurpleEurope

Why did you even pick the name BlueAfrica?

That one line was supposed to say "she let us IN and called us darlings," I guess I fucked up there lol.

Thanks so much for the advice! I'll try to think of a name for all of my poems that way.

I accidentally left my comment down there, so look down there!

Hey there! I really liked your poem (although it made me a bit sad), the only thing was the dot dots bothered me a bit? %u2665PE

I did origianally had it as "Where nature showed perfecton", but I changed, but you're right, it does flow better that way. Also, it'd chronological. She's talking about those times, ...

Bethy- Frey is the greek god of earth's fertility and peace. I couldn't see the flowers; earth was infertile and sad. And yes, that is for Papa's class.

You have beautiful dreams. There was ice everywhere. As soon as she peeked around the doorway into the dark corridor beyond, all she was greeted with was ice. There was ...

Made me tear up a little. That is all.

Oops! I messed up.

I didn't say it was completely truthful! And The number thing was supposed to be a smiley face/.

Just realized i effed up the rhyme scheme.... shiitttt

Bethy-I meant that when im THINKING of them its fast, but when im WITH them it's normal, i should have italicized normal, but the other two thought it was fine, ...

Great job Girl!

@PurpleEurope thinks that was wicked! Totally beasty. Make some more! Katie out #azkaban style