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Re: Sax and Violins
What a beautiful poem!! You do a great job at evoking powerful emotions while painting intense pictures with your masterful use of imagery! Seriously, well done! The only criticism I ...
Aug 1, 2014 -
Re: Earth
What a beautiful poem! I love your use of imagery here; you do a great job at painting a picture for me. The tone is light and uplifting, which is ...
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: felo de se
Wow. What a powerful poem! Great job! Okay, so let's talk about the beauty of this piece! First, I do have a little question concerning my confusion with the beginning ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: Selection with gambits
You have a really solid poem going here. I think the rhythm is great; you have great flow so that it is a smooth read. I really just liked everything ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: The Silent Game
Wow, this took a totally unexpected twist at the end! What a great story! I really liked it a lot!! this seems to me like a piece that you could ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: Eulogy for a Dragonfly
Wow, I really like this piece! Very well done! It's adorable, sweet, sad, and everything in between! Awesome! First off, I love your diction. Sometimes overusing large words can be ...
Jul 19, 2014 -
Re: Haunting Shadows
Wow, this all went so differently than I had expected! The ending was so crazy! I loved it! So, Thewriter13 obviously took care of nitpicks, so I'll just look at ...
Jul 19, 2014 -
Re: Mermaid
Wow, this was a beautiful poem. It was poignant, emotional, and was really able to pull at the heart strings of the reader!! well done! The second stanza here was ...
Jul 18, 2014 -
Re: Forgiveness
An interesting story, I was expecting something different, but this was very good! I was expecting that this guy would just be being all nice, trying to get her to ...
Jul 18, 2014 -
Re: The Train Man
Wow, I was not expecting the ending there! It was a shocker! I was surprised at how short the piece is, but you managed to pack a lot into just ...
Jul 18, 2014 -
Re: Take Off Your Glasses
This was a cute piece. :) First off, I LOVE MICHAEL JACKSON, and that's why I read this piece in the first place! I can very much relate to your ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: Her Broken Soul.
nice job :). I liked the ending, I thought it was funny! It was a nice twist to what would have been an extremely tragic ending! I was honestly expecting ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: when you're mad, you're never alone.
Wow. I'm no poet, so poetry isn't my strong suit. So, even though I'm no poem expert, I sure know that this was amazing! It's so well written! So beautiful! ...
Jul 15, 2014 -
Re: Depression/Reality (She Said No)
Wow.... Okay, this was a seriously intense piece! There are so many different things I like about it! So, let's start a wonderful list :P 1) You rhyme! -- Now, ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: Part 1: Melinda Marvolo
Things that were good: -You have good character development for the most part. Terence is a very clear character, as is Ash, I can picture how they look and act ...
Jul 7, 2014