PumpkinCat

Can someone please tell me why its not going into stanzas when I'm transferring it from a word document >.>?

Thanks for the reviews guys ^_^

It is a role-reversal T_T. The heroes become corrupt with power. like the malefactors did.

Thanks for the review and I haven't really had any Ideas for the book but your idea of the demon community really got me thinking and I'm working on another ...

So, how much can I pay you... to make you sing.

mrhill92 I can see that you do not understand the poem entirely. the poem is meant to reflect against are sins and how we destroy the world by pollution and ...

Here is where it originated I was listening to this when I made it:

The music starts and that devil of a smile comes in. Your life and achievements have built up to this moment. The momentous occasion of that charming dance The devils ...

I love this. Mostly because its Hetalia related and the grammar is almost perfect. I almost want to say that its plagiarized but It's not because I searched Google and ...

I'd have to agree with LadyPurple. Overall I really like this story and I would like to hear more. :)

I like this, it has lots of strong adjectives and a strong meaning. But your grammar is a little off. For example hey still somehow manage toavert the direction. it's ...

I really liked this tad of work. Your meaning in the poem is very good and dark. The stanzas are planned out well and I don't have anything else to ...

Very dark, I was expecting the person to save her not let her fall. Its good overall but, it lacks length I feel like it could go on longer. I ...