PrinceofTerror

Hola mysterygirl, Jake here for your literary work review. I think that this should be categorized in poetry section; you'll just have to change the paragraphs into several stanza. There's ...

Hola, let's now review your hope-packed poem! XD The message was good, and the first stanza and the last part were strong statements (if you'll ask me). @hermoine315 already mentioned ...

I think that this simple yet meaningful poem was created by a woman in love. This poem is good, to be honest. It shows your story with him, and how ...

I thought that this was a ghost story or something supernatural, based on the title, but I was wrong. XD The idea of the story is good; I think this ...

Broken promises and unkept vows are the two main reasons of a broken house. Or maybe we should use "home" for a more forceful impact. Once mom or dad turned ...

This is a good read during lunch break; the story is short and not time consuming. I love horrifying and terrifying stories that's why I chose your post. The story, ...

This is the first article/essay that I have read in this site, and I could say that the factual numbers given were used well as your ground in giving your ...

All right let's begin our chapter 1 review. First of all, the first 3 paragraphs of your chapter were confusing instead of inviting (in my opinion). In the first paragraph, ...

This is not bad for someone coming out from a four-year-without-writing season. The words were simple and carefully chosen, and the grammar was good. Writing this essay was a good ...

For me, your chapter 1 could be described in one word: anfractuous. Mainly for the reason that the first few paragraphs of the chapter made me believe that this is ...

A poignant poem, indeed! The shortest poem I've ever read thus far, and yet so meaningful. The words used were very simple, but the message it conveys will thrust deeply ...