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Hello felistia, here I am on a roll trying to get in a review of your next chapter. I see that most of the reviewers here have written you pretty ...

I can't really deny a wall post that is asking for a review for a first chapter, so here I am, ready to review. I personally think that you portrayed ...

Hello Chrissy, so I see that EternalRain has covered the nitpicks, but I'm feeling up to a line-by-line review of your short story, something that I haven't done in a ...

Heya Noelle, I know that you literally just posted this today, but I felt so excited that I had to read and review this tonight. It's just such an action-packed ...

Hello Lightsong, here I am trying to continue with this reviewing. I am again surprised that only two people that reviewed this so far, but then again I know that ...

Hello felistia, here I am continuing my progression with your novel by chapter 3. This is a shorter chapter, so I just wanted to let you know that naturally, you ...

Hello Lightsong. I am pretty surprised that there are only three reviews of this so far, because since this is the first chapter I was expecting a little bit more. ...

Hello this is Pretzel here with another review to add on to your chapter two of your novel. You asked me to review and I will try to do so. ...

Heya Timmy, as you have requested, here I am to write this review for you. It's quite funny, because I get many people who comment that they want to do ...

Hello SuperAnimalCrossing, here is Pretzel for a review, just as requested! I know that other reviewers that also pointed out that you practically did a lot of telling, with very ...

Hello steam. I have got to agree with artybird, because I am definitively not as majorly disappointed as other reviewers are. You gave us enough closure about the cause of ...

Hello Himan (for short). Pretzel is here for a review. As I have already said before, Welcome to YWS! Glad to have you posting your first work on here and ...

Hello Wolfe. Pretzel here for a review for your novel. I am actually very very sorry that I am behind, I just kind of got behind in a lot of ...

Hello and welcome to YWS. I am here to review this of yours, because the part about the villain really quite intrigues me. I did like the last effect of ...

Hello Steggy! Here I am for my.... 300th review! I'm that that of a poetry whiz, but I'll truly try my best. Let's get straight into it, shall we? I ...