PrehistoricEchoes

If there's one thing I've gotten from this (besides the positive which I'll mention next), it's confusion. When I started reading, I felt like I was reading something from a ...

Hey! Sorry it's been so long, but I've been off doing college. Anyway, back and I've caught up. This is actually turning in to a pretty great story! I really ...

Echo here for a review. Also, I'm just going to get this out of the way, but I subscribe to the logic that giant robots make everything better, and it ...

All right, Echo here for a review. I like the formula of the argument, but it makes some major, and I mean major, assumptions on Biblical interpretation, philosophy, and worldview. ...

Echo here for a review. Worldbuilding being my strong suit, I'll start here. I like the premise. Plague stories are interesting, and they offer a lot of variety (especially when ...

Echo back for the first time in a long time. I'm trying to catch up with this. Anyway, the last few chapters have been really enjoyable. You're pretty good at ...

All right, I'm back for chapter two! So Daniel's the farmboy. Gonna call him Luke from now on! NO! BAD ECHO! ENOUGH STAR WARS REFERENCES! First thing I thought here ...

All right, PrehistoricEchoes here to review! First off, I like the premise. It seems quite original and the setting works fairly well. I also like your descriptions. When you get ...

This thing reeks of Bionicle, and I love it! A lot of my own stuff has roots in Bionicle. After all, it is probably one of the most original fantasy ...

All right, PrehistoricEchoes here to review. Also, glad to see a novel chapter be novel-length. Quite refreshing! However, it is a bit long, so I suggest you separate lengthy chapters ...

All right, two things, and I think I'll go with the positive first. You have excellent descriptions and a superb writing style. The words ebb and flow with the scenery ...

I'm not a poetry guy, but says a lot about the casual worship culture in many churches today. We go, we sing a bunch of upbeat songs about how cool ...

Well, it's a good chapter. As usual I've waited far too long to review but I'll leave my thoughts here anyway! First off, I found that some of your sentences ...

Hmm...I don't know what to feel about this chapter. I'll start with the blunt statement and say I felt as if you degraded somewhat since the last two parts. Where ...

Sorry it's taken me so long to get around to reviewing this. It's been a long couple of weeks. Anyway, since all the nitpicking seems to have been handled in ...