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Re: One and One Make Two.
I liked it... It's nice... And I could get what you wanted to say... Overall, a nice piece... :)
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: What is Love?
It's nice... :)
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: Ode to Young Writers Society
I liked the poem... :) It's different and cool... :)
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: The Huge Claw
it seems interesting... :) i'd like to read more... :)
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: The Silent Laughter
I liked it ... Actually, sometimes I like straight forward language... This was touching... :)
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: A fake phase
I could imagine a tune in my head and it sounded good... I'd like to listen to it...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: See Me
I liked the lyrics, but some more lines would have taken the song to some other level... Anyway, I liked reading this... :)
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Dead Summer
I liked your song... :) It has a nice ring to it... :)
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: deleted
I liked the message of the poem... :)
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: What Do you Want
I liked your song...The first two lines are my favorite: " I don’t understand why everything falls out Of places that we’ve thought we could keep high enough " Nice... ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Life is...
I really liked the idea of your poem... But I think you should use more powerful words and a bit more creative expression... Anyway, I liked your work... :)
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: The real you
I really loved it... It's awesome... We all wear masks, just to cover our true emotions... I really loved your piece. :)
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Title pending *suggestions welcome*
Nice beginning... I would like to read more... :)
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Little things
Thank you for your reviews, harleighblake and JRaye... @harleighblake- I sometimes use that website, but couldn't find any satisfactory word... Still, I'll try... @JRaye- In the second stanza, the sma
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Open, simple
I liked reading this. It's kind of sweet. I liked these lines very much: "Life isn't as simple as you make it appear Even the happy people have a depth ...
Mar 11, 2011
