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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: One and One Make Two.

    I liked it... It's nice... And I could get what you wanted to say... Overall, a nice piece... :)

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: What is Love?

    It's nice... :)

    Mar 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Ode to Young Writers Society

    I liked the poem... :) It's different and cool... :)

    Mar 24, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: The Huge Claw

    it seems interesting... :) i'd like to read more... :)

    Mar 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Silent Laughter

    I liked it ... Actually, sometimes I like straight forward language... This was touching... :)

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: A fake phase

    I could imagine a tune in my head and it sounded good... I'd like to listen to it...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: See Me

    I liked the lyrics, but some more lines would have taken the song to some other level... Anyway, I liked reading this... :)

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Dead Summer

    I liked your song... :) It has a nice ring to it... :)

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    I liked the message of the poem... :)

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: What Do you Want

    I liked your song...The first two lines are my favorite: " I don’t understand why everything falls out Of places that we’ve thought we could keep high enough " Nice... ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Life is...

    I really liked the idea of your poem... But I think you should use more powerful words and a bit more creative expression... Anyway, I liked your work... :)

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The real you

    I really loved it... It's awesome... We all wear masks, just to cover our true emotions... I really loved your piece. :)

    Mar 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Title pending *suggestions welcome*

    Nice beginning... I would like to read more... :)

    Mar 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Little things

    Thank you for your reviews, harleighblake and JRaye... @harleighblake- I sometimes use that website, but couldn't find any satisfactory word... Still, I'll try... @JRaye- In the second stanza, the sma

    Mar 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Open, simple

    I liked reading this. It's kind of sweet. I liked these lines very much: "Life isn't as simple as you make it appear Even the happy people have a depth ...

    Mar 11, 2011


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