Poopsie

As requested, I'm here for a review. To say the least, I like it. Your plot intrigues me, your dialogue is a bit stale, but your story line makes up ...

Hello. Pigeon, or ''poopsie'' here for a review. To start off, I like your imagery. It reminds me of my own work. I also like your consistency, but i want ...

ahhhh. Love this thing. Admittedly it starts out rocky. I know rhyming is SUPER DUPER DUPER hard to do while not sounding fake, but nevertheless. I would suggest trying to ...

A very heartfelt poem indeed. Hi, Poopsie or ''pigeon'' here for a review. To start off, I could feel the heart you put into this story. It feels real and ...

hey, im here to review. I love how this starts out. It seems heartfelt and I love how it flows, but as it goes on, you begin to use imagery ...

very consistent theme. I also love your concept. I think this would look a lot better as a story. As it is now it looks half baked, and that's not ...

It seems like you're confused on what you're trying to right. It feels like a rap, but it doesn't rhyme. Is it spoken word? I love what your trying to ...

since the only thing I really do anymore is poetry, I'm taking yours seriously. You have a knack for imagery and you flow your sentences well. I love how, despite ...

hi. I love your imagery, your description, and your wording, but while your images are great i don't see any meaning to it. You have a lot of words on ...

Hi, this is Verser here for a review. I like the unique approach to poetry, I also like a lot of the wording, but I don't like the theme and ...

Hi, this is Verser here for a review. You have great wording, you do a great job making ordinary occurrences sound almost supernatural. I love the way this poem is ...

Hello, this is Verser here for a review. I'm going to get straight to the point, I love love love your imagery and description, but I really think you can ...

an elegant poem about deep thoughts and religion. To start, I really liked this poem because of its theme, the way you worded your sentences, and the vocabulary you used. ...

A very heartfelt and sad story of a lost little brother. I liked this very much. One of the only nit picks I had was your continuation of sentences on ...

Yea, kind of what retro said. I like the poem in general, I like your word choice and your theme. I love the way you describe the romance and feeling ...