Pompadour

Thanks for the review! If it isn't much of a bother, could you pin-point the places where I've made the rest of the "similar" mistakes so I can correct them ...

Haha, I've saved a draft on it and I'll review it tomorrow. For review day! *raises sword*

Aww, thanks Tim! This really made my day! :D And yes, it's a song. Though I can't sing to save my life. Lol. >.< Thanks for the review! Do you ...

Aw, Sushi. :P Thank you for the review! :D And the italics just exist because I like them and I'm weird like that.

I've read Kubla Khan (Xanadu), haha. But I'm not an opium-addict. Really. It's just the sugar. ^_^ And thank you so much for the review! (This was also a draft, ...

I thought there was something missing! So, just a question, if you seriously don't mind me asking... but a chorus is repeated twice or thrice, right?

^ I know how that is. I've often received reviews saying, "Now, the imagery is nice but what exactly is the purpose of this piece?" And it's quite alright, since ...

Thanks for the review! :3

You hit the nail on the head. Hard. That's exactly what it's meant to convey. XD Thanks for the review!

It's actually based on insomnia, but I didn't clarify it in the poem, particularly because I wanted the reader to develop ideas on their own and infer the poem in ...

I just saw this right now. Thanks for the review! :D

Thanks so much for the zaptastic review! :D

Haha, I do like pomegranates. :D Yes! You've voiced that particular fault out! I had a feeling his decision was far too ... impulsive, but since I'd already written the ...

This is my favourite smiley: :twisted: Oh, and just to let you know - chapter two is up! :)

Thanks for the review! Ooh, and welcome to YWS! :D