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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: seanoughts & skyknits

    ...I'll never look at the word 'gesticulations' the same way again. XP

    May 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: unlabelled swinging aortas

    Oops! Wrong link. This is the right one.

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: unlabelled swinging aortas

    Capitalisation is not a must in poetry. Thank you for your thoughts! It isn't really a bad habit; it's intentional. But please do let me know if you think the ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: unlabelled swinging aortas

    I deliberately left the poem uncapitalised and punctuation sparse, as Flite mentioned. The reason the lines are broken up like that is because I was playing with enjambment, although if ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: cold feet + guests

    And I just saw this. XD Thank you for the review, although this is quite overdue! >.>

    Apr 21, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: Knackered Bloodfists

    Thank you so much for this! I intended for the story to include quite a bit of fist-fighting, initially, but I wrapped it up quickly due to time-constraints. XD I'll ...

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: twenty fourteen syllables: a history in fragments

    I adore you thank you for this

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: cold feet + guests

    Mar 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: seanoughts & skyknits

    Thank you ever so muchly! :3 I will get to the editing straightaway.

    Mar 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: if the streets touch the sky

    *iffies :P Autocorrect and I don't get along.

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: if the streets touch the sky

    Capitalisation is not a must in poetry. Thank you for the review! I will be rechecking the poem for any other grammatical offices and such~

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Cactus Leaves-- For Good (Ch. 1)

    Ahh, things make more sense now. I have no real iffies with the formal dialogue, just be careful about not overdoing it. It can get distracting sometimes. And of course! ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Narrative Re: Angelboy left home

    Thank you thank you for this!

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Pinky Fingers and Whispered Words

    I think I get carried away, but it depends on if my phone is being nice to me. XP You're welcome!

    Mar 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Somehow..

    No problem! I'm just glad to help! :D

    Mar 4, 2015


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— Captain James T. Kirk