Pompadour

Hullo. Here for a quick review~ Okay, so this was lovely. It was passionate in that subtle, serene way. It was simple, yet profound. Kudos on that! I especially liked ...

Heya! Pompadour here to review as requested~ Technical His orphanage was gonna get a new lease of life. But alas, the red-tapism of bureaucrats slammed his changes of reviving the ...

Helloooo there Lostthought! Pompadour here for a quick review~ Technical Her life ended from a gamble I played. I think "because of" would be more appropriate there. That was one ...

Hullo! I've been intending to review this for a really long time, but procrastination just keeps getting in my way. Without further ado then -- onwards! Page 1: The Book ...

Heya! Thought I'd pop by for a review! Okay, so I'm reviewing as I read, and whoa. The way you use imagery is brilliant! Your first few lines captivated me, ...

Hey. Pompadour here for a quick review~ Technical Flowers pile up in the worst way , A period is more appropriate in place of that comma. I sit by myself, ...

Heya! Here to review~ Technical The sun slowly sets on the distant horizon , there is little noise except for me picking on the ice so it can fit into ...

Hi there~ As a first poem after a really long time, this is actually really good. I'll admit, it is a little vague in places, but the subject you've chosen ...

I know, I was meant to be here a pretty long time ago, but I actually forgot to submit the draft. *grins sheepishly* Oh, gosh. I just finished reading this. ...

Hey shulcan! I'm here for a quick review~ Technical Do you care ? enough to stop pretending you're so tough That question mark doesn't belong there. Corrected: Do you care ...

Hullo! It's midnight as I read this, and I am now glancing at my window every now and then. Gosh, this was creepy. I loved it. On with the review ...

Heya. Thought I'd pop by for a quick review! Technical So, so I'm reviewing this as I read, and so far so good. I haven't found any nitpicks, and oh ...

Heya Messenger! Thought I'd pop by for a quick review after all. (I'm actually supposed to be studying right now. >.< ) Let me just bull-doze the nit-pick-iness out of ...

Wheep wheep. I asked you to review my story, and I thought I'd pop by your portfolio for a review too, since I should actually review more often! Anyway, onwards! ...

Hullo there Strange! Pompadour here for a quick review! Technical OK, so before I move on with the technicalities, I suggest you write the Author's note in bold so the ...