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Re: Law of creativity
Hey~ I'm going to make this short, but hopefully I'll be able to get my point across clearly enough. Basically, when I first read through this, it seemed to be ...
Dec 21, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Prologue and Chapter 1
Hola, Fort! I saw chapter 38 of your novel skulking around the Green Room and thought I'd stop by to review it as promised. But being the amazingly nice person ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: you will always come back wanting more
Howdy, Spark. ^^ I'm always a bit reluctant when it comes to critiquing your poetry because it's just so darn lovely and I'm awful at reviewing poetry anyway. I guess ...
Oct 20, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 3.2 Girl
I'm baaack! And late, too. :o I'm making this a habit, urgh. Happy Review Day! Less stuffy and it’s quieter, although I can still hear the multiple conversations—all of them ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: ...
Heya, Fiendy! I don't have the time for an in-depth review, so I'll try to make this quick. Honestly speaking, I know almost next to nothing about critiquing lyrics, so ...
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: Bond of Memories (Chapter 4-5)
Howdy, howdy. An' a happy review day to you as well. *tips hat* Okay, so I'll just talk generally about the chapter/s here instead of picking things out, since that ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 27.
Hey, Rav! Happy Review Day~ So, first off: thank you for the short summary-ish thing at the top of the chapter. I don't know how much of it I managed ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 9.1
Hullo, hullo! I know I'm insanely, epically late, and I feel awful for not reviewing this sooner. But I am here now! Lemme go over the technical busy-ness real quick. ...
Jan 10, 2015 -
Re: Don't Worry I was Already Chipped Before You Shattered Me
Hello. Okay, so frankly, my brain feels like it could spontaneously combust today, and I'm tired but intent on reviewing anyway. So forgive me if I sound grouchy--although I'll try ...
Sep 25, 2014 -
Re: Colors
Heyo, Sky~ I'm going to make this review a quick one; I'm supposed to be in bed at the mo'. >.> Okay, so before I start off, I will say ...
Sep 22, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 3.1 Girl
Hey, Tim! So I think I'll be spending less time scouring over the nit-picky business this time and just type down my thoughts over this as I read. Let's see ...
Sep 20, 2014 -
Re: The Cold Wind of Death
Yo, Deanie. I know I have tons of Eyes Wide Shut to catch up on--but I saw this and couldn't resist dropping by to leave a quick review; I'll be ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: Going through Time-Chapter Three: I Go Mental
Back for more~ Quick nit-picks: I screamed as Sadie fell to the floor, watching as she turned white and cold. I could distantly hear Ethan laughing his stupid butt off. ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: I Want to Dance with Somebody
Hey there, lonewolf! Pompadour here to review this lovely piece for you~ Welcome to YWS! Before I begin, though, I'm just letting you know that I bumped the rating to ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: freedom in the darkness
Hey, IronSpark! Pompadour here for a quick review! I'm generally not very good at critiquing poetry, but I think I'll take a shot at this. Just bear with me, okay? ...
Sep 6, 2014
